for Nella Memoria7/28/2003 c1 
39zelle
yay! Your first posting, ne? Welcome to the community!
Since Incubabe said you'd be good and awesome and totally worth reaing (though not in so many words ;P) I decided to take a look...
And lo and behold! I'm not disappointed!
That was a beautiful introduction. And the overbearing bully analogy was really unique! (To me, anyways)...I dunno. For some reason, that one really stuck out to me. And made me giggle. ^_^
"Forrest" hmm...I think that's spelled wrong. But then, that would be me being an anal dweeb...
The conversations between the two are so sweet and endearing...and i don't think the transitions were wierd. Because the beginning is her as an older woman, and then with each change of the wind, she remembers him...a flashback, if you will.
"But riddle me this Batman why to they make us ..." Hm. To me this was a little awkward...btu I might just not be familiar with the phrase or something...
"Ryan was the first to act on the moment before it faded away like so many of their previous “moments”. He quickly kissed her on the lips. They both looked at each other, both of them holding their breath. The few seconds seemed to span a lifetime before Jane leaned over and kissed him."
This scene absolutely had me squirming in my seat! So cute! Yes, yes. The romantic in me speaks.
This one left me all melancholy and tingly. Sharp breeze in the curious melting in-betweenness of an orange July noon. Dark chocolate. Coffee with almost too little sugar. Yea, that about sums it up.
So, since this reminds me of Dark chocolate, and I like chocolate in general, I believe I shall be putting you on my favorites ^_^.
39zelleyay! Your first posting, ne? Welcome to the community!
Since Incubabe said you'd be good and awesome and totally worth reaing (though not in so many words ;P) I decided to take a look...
And lo and behold! I'm not disappointed!
That was a beautiful introduction. And the overbearing bully analogy was really unique! (To me, anyways)...I dunno. For some reason, that one really stuck out to me. And made me giggle. ^_^
"Forrest" hmm...I think that's spelled wrong. But then, that would be me being an anal dweeb...
The conversations between the two are so sweet and endearing...and i don't think the transitions were wierd. Because the beginning is her as an older woman, and then with each change of the wind, she remembers him...a flashback, if you will.
"But riddle me this Batman why to they make us ..." Hm. To me this was a little awkward...btu I might just not be familiar with the phrase or something...
"Ryan was the first to act on the moment before it faded away like so many of their previous “moments”. He quickly kissed her on the lips. They both looked at each other, both of them holding their breath. The few seconds seemed to span a lifetime before Jane leaned over and kissed him."
This scene absolutely had me squirming in my seat! So cute! Yes, yes. The romantic in me speaks.
This one left me all melancholy and tingly. Sharp breeze in the curious melting in-betweenness of an orange July noon. Dark chocolate. Coffee with almost too little sugar. Yea, that about sums it up.
So, since this reminds me of Dark chocolate, and I like chocolate in general, I believe I shall be putting you on my favorites ^_^.