
5/5/2005 c20 u no who
yay for finishing! but im confused as to a few things 1st: did the silver tower have some sort of magic-draining power? 2nd: did normal magic have tha ability to topple the council-thingy 3rd:whats so bad about people forgetting about stuff? 4th: when did harper give his chestnut oil to her 5th: could the silver tower not be built with magic
yay for finishing! but im confused as to a few things 1st: did the silver tower have some sort of magic-draining power? 2nd: did normal magic have tha ability to topple the council-thingy 3rd:whats so bad about people forgetting about stuff? 4th: when did harper give his chestnut oil to her 5th: could the silver tower not be built with magic
5/5/2005 c10 me again
yay for chapter 10, i discovered that when i push enter, the owrds run together, so ill stop it. so far, its all making sense to me, cept for the poem, which is kinda confusing, and doesn't rhyme (it would be so cool if it did). still dont know if i no the foreshadowing yet...
yay for chapter 10, i discovered that when i push enter, the owrds run together, so ill stop it. so far, its all making sense to me, cept for the poem, which is kinda confusing, and doesn't rhyme (it would be so cool if it did). still dont know if i no the foreshadowing yet...
5/5/2005 c7 me i think u no who
i might use my name eventaully , but nvmim at ch 7, and so far its been really good. some typos kinda got wierd, but w/eim not sure whether or not i picke dup the foreshadowing or not, butt ill ask u later
i might use my name eventaully , but nvmim at ch 7, and so far its been really good. some typos kinda got wierd, but w/eim not sure whether or not i picke dup the foreshadowing or not, butt ill ask u later
7/13/2004 c12
10laststarinthesky
sorry bout the short review! on a time limit4 internet! i'm sure u wouldn't mind thou seeings how youre in italy... hehehe... luv it lots! that sux... the whole kingdom hates him! bet he DOES have something to do with her mothers death! SM

sorry bout the short review! on a time limit4 internet! i'm sure u wouldn't mind thou seeings how youre in italy... hehehe... luv it lots! that sux... the whole kingdom hates him! bet he DOES have something to do with her mothers death! SM
7/13/2004 c11 laststarinthesky
hey megs! hows italy? sorry it took so long to review! like way late! anyways... i hate creol. thanks. needed to hate a character there other than harper for ever leaving! that somestone thing was clever. never would have picked it up! so hows other stuff? i was in agi's group on yahoo but that just made me mad. its their little circle of people that they choose- i don't know how but somehow do... and completely ignore other peoples messages.. sorry for the rant. needed to read a good story to make me less mad! thanx! luvs SM
hey megs! hows italy? sorry it took so long to review! like way late! anyways... i hate creol. thanks. needed to hate a character there other than harper for ever leaving! that somestone thing was clever. never would have picked it up! so hows other stuff? i was in agi's group on yahoo but that just made me mad. its their little circle of people that they choose- i don't know how but somehow do... and completely ignore other peoples messages.. sorry for the rant. needed to read a good story to make me less mad! thanx! luvs SM
6/22/2004 c20
21WiredCrazyFrances
OMG IT'S OVER? wow...that was amazing!omg so so good. that was a great way to tie it up...wow...so good...i can't wait until you get your new story up...have a blast in italy btw! awesome story!

OMG IT'S OVER? wow...that was amazing!omg so so good. that was a great way to tie it up...wow...so good...i can't wait until you get your new story up...have a blast in italy btw! awesome story!
6/21/2004 c20
21AmethystTrish
yay! cheers! thank you for writing this- it had been so long between posts i had forgotten alex's last name. wonderful ending. bravo!

yay! cheers! thank you for writing this- it had been so long between posts i had forgotten alex's last name. wonderful ending. bravo!
6/21/2004 c20 dreamingofflyingaway
*pokes indignantly* you haven't reviewed my second chappie! *grin* ah hell, I'm too tired to be angry, lol, I mean, it is 1:00 in the morning after all, LOL! anyways, I just wanted to remind you what a beautiful story this is, was, [oh screw tenses]you better keep on writing, and I better be your beta-reader! :P hmm..that was ALMOST an alliteration, sadly, at this time in the morning, I can't pull literary devices like that off...
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
*pokes indignantly* you haven't reviewed my second chappie! *grin* ah hell, I'm too tired to be angry, lol, I mean, it is 1:00 in the morning after all, LOL! anyways, I just wanted to remind you what a beautiful story this is, was, [oh screw tenses]you better keep on writing, and I better be your beta-reader! :P hmm..that was ALMOST an alliteration, sadly, at this time in the morning, I can't pull literary devices like that off...
best of luck and happy typing
~dreaming
6/14/2004 c19 Hawk Mage
You're writing more after this story right? It was such a sweet ending. I can't wait for the epilogue.
I loved the third movie. Some of my friends thought it could be better, but I liked it. Nice little tidbit about the animagi.
You're writing more after this story right? It was such a sweet ending. I can't wait for the epilogue.
I loved the third movie. Some of my friends thought it could be better, but I liked it. Nice little tidbit about the animagi.
6/13/2004 c19
35TheNyl
Sorry I didn't review the other chapters... I just now got to read them... been realy busy... Loved the story! ^_^

Sorry I didn't review the other chapters... I just now got to read them... been realy busy... Loved the story! ^_^
6/10/2004 c6
10laststarinthesky
never know what to write! what are you supposed to write in a review? honesty? i HATE this story. it SUCKS! Just joking! love it... as usual;)

never know what to write! what are you supposed to write in a review? honesty? i HATE this story. it SUCKS! Just joking! love it... as usual;)
6/8/2004 c5 laststarinthesky
HA hahaha! 4 chapters in one night! bet that's a record! don't be alarmed by the time reviewed, i did read the chapters! got a whole lot more reviews in that word document but decided i would only post 4 a night! sorry! this time I get to keep YOU in suspense! ;)
HA hahaha! 4 chapters in one night! bet that's a record! don't be alarmed by the time reviewed, i did read the chapters! got a whole lot more reviews in that word document but decided i would only post 4 a night! sorry! this time I get to keep YOU in suspense! ;)
6/8/2004 c4 laststarinthesky
always glad you can introuce made up creatures/ powers/ characters! Still remember the trundle bird? watch for him in the finally started upcoming actually written version of our grade 7 wanna be novel!
always glad you can introuce made up creatures/ powers/ characters! Still remember the trundle bird? watch for him in the finally started upcoming actually written version of our grade 7 wanna be novel!
6/8/2004 c3 laststarinthesky
kinda ruins the suspense when you know what happens next but gotta say... nice cut off to the chapter! very cleva! hope that was long enough... sorry ;)
kinda ruins the suspense when you know what happens next but gotta say... nice cut off to the chapter! very cleva! hope that was long enough... sorry ;)