for NonStop Jaunting7/26/2003 c2 
12Beached Stars
(This is Sam, Mar/The Author's sister.)
I love this story; it’s got massive potential. Everything about it feels very real, and not flaky or lame. The characters are very authentic with their flaws and imperfections that make them seem genuine. The setting is interesting and the little historical bits are charming and out of the ordinary. (Like the music or the clothing brands.) But the best thing about it is the manner in which it is wrote. Anyone can write a story if they’re forced to, but it takes someone good…very good in fact to carry it out this well. It’s dark but realistic. Which is to say there’s a sun…but it doesn’t have a smiley face on it, and it’s overcast. So that means it’s not sugary-sweet nor is it Satanically-evil. It’s…professional!
I hope you keep writing it, because I’m excited for the next chapter. The entire project has an optimistic vibe, so I think it’s all-good. Let the good times role….
12Beached Stars(This is Sam, Mar/The Author's sister.)
I love this story; it’s got massive potential. Everything about it feels very real, and not flaky or lame. The characters are very authentic with their flaws and imperfections that make them seem genuine. The setting is interesting and the little historical bits are charming and out of the ordinary. (Like the music or the clothing brands.) But the best thing about it is the manner in which it is wrote. Anyone can write a story if they’re forced to, but it takes someone good…very good in fact to carry it out this well. It’s dark but realistic. Which is to say there’s a sun…but it doesn’t have a smiley face on it, and it’s overcast. So that means it’s not sugary-sweet nor is it Satanically-evil. It’s…professional!
I hope you keep writing it, because I’m excited for the next chapter. The entire project has an optimistic vibe, so I think it’s all-good. Let the good times role….
7/26/2003 c1 7Sapphire Mirage
Wow. Your use of words are great! And the fact that you did some research on the year and stuff makes you a true author. Very odd subject to write about, but I think a lot of writers these days are afraid to write about stuff like this. Especially dealing with the past. I give you Props!
7Sapphire MirageWow. Your use of words are great! And the fact that you did some research on the year and stuff makes you a true author. Very odd subject to write about, but I think a lot of writers these days are afraid to write about stuff like this. Especially dealing with the past. I give you Props!
7/26/2003 c1 Our Behemoth
RU! :D!
'Man, and thinking about that night sky. The freaking night sky, the winking stars, and all of that formal bullshit. I can't say a parked car in the middle of the night was all that passionate in words of the great arts, thank you very much William-Fucking-Shakespeare.'
I like the detail of this story, MARGO. And, unlike those other people who didn't even FREAKIN' REVIEW, I read it all. XD' WHO! ^O^ I hafta say, you're very good at writing and expressing *real* human emotions. XD *dance*
Continue please! I liked the ending paragraph! :D *favorites*
RU! :D!
'Man, and thinking about that night sky. The freaking night sky, the winking stars, and all of that formal bullshit. I can't say a parked car in the middle of the night was all that passionate in words of the great arts, thank you very much William-Fucking-Shakespeare.'
I like the detail of this story, MARGO. And, unlike those other people who didn't even FREAKIN' REVIEW, I read it all. XD' WHO! ^O^ I hafta say, you're very good at writing and expressing *real* human emotions. XD *dance*
Continue please! I liked the ending paragraph! :D *favorites*
7/25/2003 c1 2BLARGH00000009
I love how you put REAL THOUGHTS in. Thinks that a human being would think. Like. . . little, nothing-things that we're inclined to think in all of our flawed perfection. I sound like I'm on crack, but I just like the writing. XD
2BLARGH00000009I love how you put REAL THOUGHTS in. Thinks that a human being would think. Like. . . little, nothing-things that we're inclined to think in all of our flawed perfection. I sound like I'm on crack, but I just like the writing. XD
7/25/2003 c1 5Aake Redfield
Great story, and making it in the time of Led Zeppelin only makes it better! Hoping to see more of it.
5Aake RedfieldGreat story, and making it in the time of Led Zeppelin only makes it better! Hoping to see more of it.