for White Eyes12/13/2003 c2 
2Silverkuja
The description here is excellent, and I love the ideas in this story, especially the way the lab is run and the abilities of the angels. Please continue soon!
~Kuja~
2SilverkujaThe description here is excellent, and I love the ideas in this story, especially the way the lab is run and the abilities of the angels. Please continue soon!
~Kuja~
7/26/2003 c1 1Guys who brought you Trident
Interesting. Promising. Intriguing. Haha... yet very, very cagey so far, giving nothing away. But very well written and suspenseful and I for one thoroughly look forward to chapter 2.
1Guys who brought you TridentInteresting. Promising. Intriguing. Haha... yet very, very cagey so far, giving nothing away. But very well written and suspenseful and I for one thoroughly look forward to chapter 2.
7/26/2003 c1 41ionlyliveindreams
Hey, cool start. Very interesting. Only one suggestion for now. Make the text italics when the angels are 'talking' to each other. It'll make it much easier to read and understand. Other than that a good start. Please continue, I want to know what happens.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
41ionlyliveindreamsHey, cool start. Very interesting. Only one suggestion for now. Make the text italics when the angels are 'talking' to each other. It'll make it much easier to read and understand. Other than that a good start. Please continue, I want to know what happens.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams