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7/31/2003 c1 19Lisa Ann
Wow, very inspirational. Indeed, there nearly always are second chances in life, however I have found that not always to be the case...

Anyway, great poem,

Lisa

:)
7/26/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
i felt that u had a really well written poem here so i m reviewing to tell u that. i think u have the all the makings of a really good writer. please r+r my stuff if u want. i suggest "hurt", "time" and "this one is called f* you." keep up the good writing because i would love to read more.

peace

recalcitrant
7/26/2003 c1 Daisy Decamps
Ahh, it's a pretty good poem. It may be easy to say, "Don't Aim For Second Best" But it is so very hard to do. There are so many smarties in the world, and it just seem that no matter how hard I try, there's always someone better than me. Ahh. Well, good poem, it encourages people to try their best, and honestly, just as long as you try your best, it doesn't matter if you're not the best. Hey! That makes me feel a lot better. Thanx, and plz check out my story, The Polar Bear At My Front Porch, and tell me wat u think.

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