1/31/2006 c3 4Forgotten Raven Goddess
ah. come on! you really cant leave it like that. I mean really. why would you leave it at that for so long?
ah. come on! you really cant leave it like that. I mean really. why would you leave it at that for so long?
3/24/2004 c3 Badtzmaru54
Hey this story is cool you should add a more chapter to it and add some sex parts in it too!
Hey this story is cool you should add a more chapter to it and add some sex parts in it too!
10/18/2003 c3 17Ayakaishi Fei
Hmm... just stumbled up this on somebodys favourites list and I liked it... alot. You *so* have to continue it, because it's *damned* interesting! Please? Nice job - good characters, good storyline, not as cliched as it could be... overall I love it.
Hmm... just stumbled up this on somebodys favourites list and I liked it... alot. You *so* have to continue it, because it's *damned* interesting! Please? Nice job - good characters, good storyline, not as cliched as it could be... overall I love it.
9/12/2003 c3 9tenshiboy
Wow... This was pretty good. Please update this soon. I really wish to read more.
Wow... This was pretty good. Please update this soon. I really wish to read more.
8/4/2003 c3 19NotEnough
You have to update. Kody is such a nob, the denial is getting him nowhere hehehe. Love it.
UPDATE.
You have to update. Kody is such a nob, the denial is getting him nowhere hehehe. Love it.
UPDATE.
8/2/2003 c3 Adam Burns
i really want to continue t0o see that developing. please read something of mine i would like youre opinion on my work
i really want to continue t0o see that developing. please read something of mine i would like youre opinion on my work
8/1/2003 c3 Cenori
Well, yay! That was great! Things are starting to happen, yes they are, yes yes yes! *beams happily*
And aw, he catches him! I really like where all this going so far. And I love the fact that they both look behind at the end, hoping the other will be looking back. Maybe someday they'll do that and they will see the other looking. ^_^
Mo... hee!
Well, yay! That was great! Things are starting to happen, yes they are, yes yes yes! *beams happily*
And aw, he catches him! I really like where all this going so far. And I love the fact that they both look behind at the end, hoping the other will be looking back. Maybe someday they'll do that and they will see the other looking. ^_^
Mo... hee!