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8/5/2003 c1 44Strawberry Chapstick
Cool! I loved the verse about the dog, for no apparant reason hehe. You feel the scary vibe thing in this, I like it!
8/2/2003 c1 69Lowell Boston
This reads almost as five poems in one. Almost every stanza could stand as its own haiku on itself. Well done. The only thing I would change would be to eleminate the redundant use of 'leaves' in the first stanza.

Thanks for posting.

7/27/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
Its really creepy... I felt scared for her...
7/27/2003 c1 Aphrodite666
This is an awesome poem. I could just picture in my mind, myself walking along a dim hallway, peering around a corner to see what lurks ahead. So many times has my imagination run astray. Keep up the good work.
7/27/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
good poem i like ti.

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