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8/6/2003 c1 3Tenika D
Very nice. One of your best poems, I think. Sorry if I seem to be saying the same thing over and over again, but I think highly of all of your stuff! It's hard sometimes to think of twelve different ways to say 'It's beautiful'.

But hey, it's beautiful.

Cheers, bella.

Tenika Dargan
7/27/2003 c1 167E. Hisifithith
this is cute! you're great at rhyming... let me guess... rhymer.com? just kidding... this is really good! kind of war-like but it's all good! but I like the way it makes you feel like the dragons are the good guys (maybe it's just me who feel like that) because yeah... anyways, this is an awesome piece! keep up the great work!

K.F.
7/27/2003 c1 96AutumnRhapsody
Yeah, it does rhyme well, although the last line is a bit long, messing w/the rhythm a bit. Good job!

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