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12/3/2003 c1 Laksha
You have a really awesome style of writing. I can almost feel the pain, and I love how you used both rhyming and repetition. You really get the point across. Keep up the good work.
11/2/2003 c1 Punky Munky
hey i think i was somewhat dead/drunk/drugged when i first reviewed this on my other account! But anyway i will give a more construcive review! Only thing i would say is in the line 'use it for drugs' i think it needs another sylable to flow so maybe say 'use it for your drugs' anyway only a suggestion. Keep writing thanx for the review :)
9/16/2003 c1 the perspectivist
that's astonishing!
9/1/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
This is good and it flows well too. Keep writing :)
8/18/2003 c1 5Thursday's Dove
God Rachel...this is very powerful and depressing...Why did you write this? Call me okay? 913-390-5817. that's my personal phone line so you can call ANY time you want. Just leave me a message and i'll call you back so you won't have to pay long distance or whatnot. Please take care. =)

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