for Alice Alice8/29/2004 c1 mythdreamer
*STARES* I could have sworn I reveiwed this AGES ago! forgive me for not doing so!
I must say that it is VERY good. I LOVE the rithim, and, I must tell you that after I read it the first time.. like ages ago, it inspired me, and I have written a few in this two line style. I would say more about Alice, but I havent read the book and barely remember the disney move... soo...
but, yes, you should post more, my dear, more. write some about the sunny state for me, please.
Anarane G. =)
(Young Tweed, Lost my dear)
*STARES* I could have sworn I reveiwed this AGES ago! forgive me for not doing so!
I must say that it is VERY good. I LOVE the rithim, and, I must tell you that after I read it the first time.. like ages ago, it inspired me, and I have written a few in this two line style. I would say more about Alice, but I havent read the book and barely remember the disney move... soo...
but, yes, you should post more, my dear, more. write some about the sunny state for me, please.
Anarane G. =)
(Young Tweed, Lost my dear)
11/16/2003 c1 
2Rusalka
Wow, this is interesting...I definately like how you start with Alice Alice, and end like that too. Its strange I must say, but very fun to read:)
2RusalkaWow, this is interesting...I definately like how you start with Alice Alice, and end like that too. Its strange I must say, but very fun to read:)
7/30/2003 c1 Yaaru
I still say that's one of the most interesting poems I've read. I really like the end. "Breathing safe, Not quite dead." Hm... I believe I shall add this to my favorite story list.
I still say that's one of the most interesting poems I've read. I really like the end. "Breathing safe, Not quite dead." Hm... I believe I shall add this to my favorite story list.
7/28/2003 c1 2Nyarth Kyukon
I love the rhythm of this, and it's nicely subversive. Alice, Alice, safe in bed. I read it three times and now it's going round my head. That has to be good ^_^
2Nyarth KyukonI love the rhythm of this, and it's nicely subversive. Alice, Alice, safe in bed. I read it three times and now it's going round my head. That has to be good ^_^
7/27/2003 c1 23sciwriter13
i like it. you've got an interesting style and i think i see understand what you're getting at. please read my poems and review if you have time. i think you'll like them.
23sciwriter13i like it. you've got an interesting style and i think i see understand what you're getting at. please read my poems and review if you have time. i think you'll like them.