for Hell's Mistress3/20/2018 c1 
17The DarkCat
Omg that was a really intetesting read, Im impressed by how well you say a story throuh poetry, the rhime was really enjoyable too! Thank you
17The DarkCatOmg that was a really intetesting read, Im impressed by how well you say a story throuh poetry, the rhime was really enjoyable too! Thank you
6/15/2014 c19 1Mina21
Good flow through the whole story.
And you have a quite wide range of language.
Nothing really there to criticize your story for.
1Mina21Good flow through the whole story.
And you have a quite wide range of language.
Nothing really there to criticize your story for.
6/15/2014 c16 Mina21
Didn't you get depressed while writing it? I mean it's quite dark.
Amazing writing skills by the way )
Didn't you get depressed while writing it? I mean it's quite dark.
Amazing writing skills by the way )
12/4/2013 c1 Fell4
This seems like a very sing-songy way of writing when your subject matter is so dark. The poem doesn't flow all the time either, having awkward trails leading to the end of your line. Try changing line 8's "of" to "and." Also, in line 12 you might want to take out the "of." That way you'll also have seven syllables. Don't get me wrong, I like this poem, especially as as I keep rereading, it's growing on me.
This seems like a very sing-songy way of writing when your subject matter is so dark. The poem doesn't flow all the time either, having awkward trails leading to the end of your line. Try changing line 8's "of" to "and." Also, in line 12 you might want to take out the "of." That way you'll also have seven syllables. Don't get me wrong, I like this poem, especially as as I keep rereading, it's growing on me.
11/7/2012 c19 JustAStranger
Wait... I'm done? Nooo!
Update! :) ... Please?
Wait... I'm done? Nooo!
Update! :) ... Please?
11/7/2012 c17 JustAStranger
I love this 33
I love this 33
11/7/2012 c13 JustAStranger
This story is the best thing I've read in a while now:)
This story is the best thing I've read in a while now:)
11/1/2012 c5 JustAStranger
This makes me feel sad:(
This makes me feel sad:(
11/1/2012 c4 JustAStranger
This is so beautiful I'm compelled to review every chapter.
This is so beautiful I'm compelled to review every chapter.
11/1/2012 c3 JustAStranger
Ahh.. I love this!
Ahh.. I love this!
11/1/2012 c2 JustAStranger
Still wow!
Still wow!
11/1/2012 c1 JustAStranger
Wow!
Wow!
2/9/2010 c19 B. P
This story is cool :]
I hope you update soon.
This story is cool :]
I hope you update soon.