for Every Last Day7/30/2003 c1 GrungeIsDead
You write such deep poems! *sighs* A meesage is sent across this, I understand it, I love this poem! Love it!
You write such deep poems! *sighs* A meesage is sent across this, I understand it, I love this poem! Love it!
7/28/2003 c1 
96AutumnRhapsody
The rhymes are good and it has a good message. I like the way there are lots of examples or whatever in the second stanza. But the second to last line doesn't exactly seem to fit, like the rhythm doesn't fit exactly.
96AutumnRhapsodyThe rhymes are good and it has a good message. I like the way there are lots of examples or whatever in the second stanza. But the second to last line doesn't exactly seem to fit, like the rhythm doesn't fit exactly.