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3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
how dark...but as always...nice poem. You write good poems. I'd like to see more...*hint*hint*hint*
8/2/2003 c1 joie 610
interesting. congratulations on your poem! just felt like saying that. in the beginning i was almost hypnotized! the poem is cool- like a fascinating story in a 'form.' yep. good job. poor mother earth. the thing with pluto and the switching planets were a little weird, but hey, in my opinion, weird is cool B-) haha,
7/30/2003 c1 seraph1004
wow... i love all yur poems! they're so good... you have pure talent, if you can use proper usage of grammer, it'll be real perfect!^^ Keep them coming!
7/29/2003 c1 12IHJ
I like. Very nice metaphorical language in the beginning. And nice twist at the end. *thumbs up* But somehow...the style of writing was... *crinkling up nose* I'm sorry but I didn't really like the style. But still, the story behind it is VERY unique!
7/28/2003 c1 118Yaquel Visain
That was fucking awesome!

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