9/1/2004 c1 Persn A
I really liked how the rhyming pattern worked in this. Nice job! ^_^
I really liked how the rhyming pattern worked in this. Nice job! ^_^
9/20/2003 c1 3prophesizer
I like your relation between this one and the demon's eyes. To tell you the truth, I'd say these are among the most interesting poems I've ever read in my life. None are really about action/supernatural stuff, but I found two that are! ;)
Anyways, cool poems, write more stories, you're really good.
WOuld u mind plz R&Ring my one and only story, The 840 Core? I have finished the 2nd chapter and posted it and the third is on its way!
-the prophesizer sees all.
I like your relation between this one and the demon's eyes. To tell you the truth, I'd say these are among the most interesting poems I've ever read in my life. None are really about action/supernatural stuff, but I found two that are! ;)
Anyways, cool poems, write more stories, you're really good.
WOuld u mind plz R&Ring my one and only story, The 840 Core? I have finished the 2nd chapter and posted it and the third is on its way!
-the prophesizer sees all.