for Angel2/26/2005 c1 V
aw so sweet I feel as if my heart's melting. Nice story-line, love that 'lust-demon, love-human' idea, which makes sense for me. I usually prefer stories in chapters, but this works for me. God/Dog is...cute. I know this sounds weird, but still =P(A god demanding for a belly rup?) You must be a Phantom fan-Erik and Christine, Michael Crawford.
aw so sweet I feel as if my heart's melting. Nice story-line, love that 'lust-demon, love-human' idea, which makes sense for me. I usually prefer stories in chapters, but this works for me. God/Dog is...cute. I know this sounds weird, but still =P(A god demanding for a belly rup?) You must be a Phantom fan-Erik and Christine, Michael Crawford.
12/25/2004 c1 
5incognitus
aw...that was just so SWEET. i mean, to be frank, there's still quite a bit of work to be done on the details and all, but i'm not complaining cos i understand that this is a one-shot kind of thing. it's strange isn't it, that the characters happen to be named erik and christine. if you love the phantom of the opera as much as i do, you'll know why i was doubly touched by your story. in phantom of the opera, it was so sad that erik and christine never got together, even though he loved her so much that he was willing to let her go away with raoul. so yeah...great job done and i hope you'll continue to write more =)
5incognitusaw...that was just so SWEET. i mean, to be frank, there's still quite a bit of work to be done on the details and all, but i'm not complaining cos i understand that this is a one-shot kind of thing. it's strange isn't it, that the characters happen to be named erik and christine. if you love the phantom of the opera as much as i do, you'll know why i was doubly touched by your story. in phantom of the opera, it was so sad that erik and christine never got together, even though he loved her so much that he was willing to let her go away with raoul. so yeah...great job done and i hope you'll continue to write more =)
9/1/2004 c1 Sammi
That was great! Completely unique and very interesting. I loved the plot and charachters,it was truly a wonderful story. Keep writing!
That was great! Completely unique and very interesting. I loved the plot and charachters,it was truly a wonderful story. Keep writing!
5/20/2004 c1 horsegurl777
So touching - - it made me cry. Awesome job on it, i loved the plot, and how she finally sells her soul thingy.
Great Job!
Sammi**
So touching - - it made me cry. Awesome job on it, i loved the plot, and how she finally sells her soul thingy.
Great Job!
Sammi**
4/17/2004 c1 Drael
First, I would like to congratulate you on a lovely little story!
Second, I would say that this story could be enhanced by adding more descriptions, and by writing through rather than thru.
First, I would like to congratulate you on a lovely little story!
Second, I would say that this story could be enhanced by adding more descriptions, and by writing through rather than thru.
4/16/2004 c1 23Cosmos Senshi
Wow! This is really, really good. Could you create a follow-up chapter, because I really enjoyed this story.
23Cosmos SenshiWow! This is really, really good. Could you create a follow-up chapter, because I really enjoyed this story.
3/3/2004 c1 The perfect sinner
Once again...that was a great story...God dammit...I'm Jealous...
:-P I';ve read two of your stories so far, and they are great and creative. Good Job. ;)
Once again...that was a great story...God dammit...I'm Jealous...
:-P I';ve read two of your stories so far, and they are great and creative. Good Job. ;)
1/24/2004 c1 10Kentura Dragmire
That was a GREAT story. Inventive, convincing, honest... I absolutely love it. The only thing I could complain about is the lack of detail... It could really be enhanced with a few extra words here and there to add flavour. Also, the use of "thru" instead of "through" kinda bothers me. It doesn't really change the effect of the story, but it would just seem a lot more formal and complete if you went back and changed it. And it would be easier to read if it was separated into chapters. Other than that... amazing. Great work.
10Kentura DragmireThat was a GREAT story. Inventive, convincing, honest... I absolutely love it. The only thing I could complain about is the lack of detail... It could really be enhanced with a few extra words here and there to add flavour. Also, the use of "thru" instead of "through" kinda bothers me. It doesn't really change the effect of the story, but it would just seem a lot more formal and complete if you went back and changed it. And it would be easier to read if it was separated into chapters. Other than that... amazing. Great work.
1/19/2004 c1 00Anonymous00
Oh dear heavens above! That was wonderful! So very very good! More like a Rocky Road ice cream, and I'm telling you that you're the very first author I've given such a compliment to.
You're one of Fictionpress's brilliant authors. ^_^
Oh dear heavens above! That was wonderful! So very very good! More like a Rocky Road ice cream, and I'm telling you that you're the very first author I've given such a compliment to.
You're one of Fictionpress's brilliant authors. ^_^
1/10/2004 c1 8Soleil Antoinette
My goodness - that was one of the best stories I have ever read. A very original plot-outline, and I just LOVE the way your characters weren't the normal 'perfect' models, yet their flaws is what made them irresistable. I didn't stop reading it until the very end, making the reader not want it to end all the same. Lovely, Charming story-Keep on writing!
8Soleil AntoinetteMy goodness - that was one of the best stories I have ever read. A very original plot-outline, and I just LOVE the way your characters weren't the normal 'perfect' models, yet their flaws is what made them irresistable. I didn't stop reading it until the very end, making the reader not want it to end all the same. Lovely, Charming story-Keep on writing!