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6/28/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
Hi! I would like to invite you to join our platform to present a good quality story to our readers! Send me a message if this offer piqued your interest!
1/2/2022 c13 marrybeth
halo, my name is Marry, an editor from fast growing platform, i am so interested with your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
4/22/2021 c1 ambethiiii
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
1/8/2009 c12 someone
this is a great story it's a shame that you haven't updated in three years though. cause i would of liked to read this story to the end.
10/15/2007 c12 3Greki
I'm so, so, so damn hooked by this story but it seems to be discontinued. Oh man, you inspired me in many ways and now you stopped. I seriously think I'm going to cry! Awesome job!
6/4/2006 c12 1empty-spiral
hey! its been a year, and you havent updated! ah! ok, seriously, i liked ur story, and i hope to see more.
11/3/2005 c12 10Hell's first Icicle
wow. all the emotions here are really strong and powerful, and i cant wait fo u to update! and yes u do hav fans! (eg me) hu r just usually too lazy to review. eep! .
7/8/2005 c12 You Win I Will Be Your Idiot
I don't think I can come up with a word for what this story is, you intimidate me with your writing, I don't know what to say.

It's perfect.

I envy you.

6/1/2005 c12 deli-lise
awesome chapter...aweomse. fantastic. Bravo.
4/6/2005 c11 IntentionallyLeftBlank

-Down with the man! Conformity is the enemy!-

You're really good... and stuff.

Although my opinion doesn't accont for much, because writing really isn't my thing... but its good.

-Carrie's such a bitch... I wanna fucking kill her... slowly.-

He's evil like that.

-very slowly... with spoons. rusty ones. or even the dreaded spnifork.-

Ignore him.

-Vengeance comes for the wicked! Release Havoc and Mayhem! Taste the blood! Taste the pain! Taste the fear! Taste the agony! Taste the hatred! Taste the shame!-

He's insane. Anyways... that actually would be a cool song... i'm thinkin Normalcy or Fishbrick material...

Sorry bout the tangents. They just...





ADD sucks... I forget...



It's good. Keep it up.

-or I will hunt you down and... well, I need plane tickets first, but then, if I see you before you see me, look out!-



Umm... wtf?... bye... sorry about him...

-I'm not finished yet!-

Well, I am.
2/25/2005 c11 12Sises
I love your story! I'm surprised that it doesn't have more reviews, hope to see you update soon, I want to know whats going to happen.

your new fan,

2/24/2005 c11 M.J. Tyger
Oh I liked this chapter, very good! You finally put a kiss in there, I was waiting for that to happen. Hope everything turns out alright for the two of them. Oh, and if you want someone to read over your chapters to check for mistakes and offer some ideas I'd be happy to help, just get my e-mail off my site. Keep writing, this story's awesome :)
2/24/2005 c10 deli-lise
please update
1/23/2005 c10 M.J. Tyger
Good, a bit confusing. There could have been some indication as to what was the dream and what was not, but overall it was very good, I liked the detail too. Keep up the good work :)
1/18/2005 c4 13avidelecteur
Wonderful story. A bunch of things, especially grammar, are off, but the story itself and your overall style more than make up for it. A promise a longer review when I finish reading, but I did notice one thing I really wanted to point out: the line "They were often arguing about this but he could never persuade the suborn bitch in the validity of his concepts." seems completely out of place, and you're editorializing a lot with your choice of adjectives there. Very very good overall. More review later,~avidelecteur
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