for Potential8/7/2003 c1 Miranda Crystal-Bearer
Encouraging. Very nice. Very hopeful. No spelling errors that I couls see, and cleverly composed. Good work.
Encouraging. Very nice. Very hopeful. No spelling errors that I couls see, and cleverly composed. Good work.
8/4/2003 c1 
37Sunflower Philosophy
I really loved this! Reminds me of the Mary Chapin Carpinter song, "Why Walk When You Can Fly"... I especially loved the last line.
About Stormy Sunlight, I had a feeling a lot of people on FP.com would identify with it...
Again, wonderful poem!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
37Sunflower PhilosophyI really loved this! Reminds me of the Mary Chapin Carpinter song, "Why Walk When You Can Fly"... I especially loved the last line.
About Stormy Sunlight, I had a feeling a lot of people on FP.com would identify with it...
Again, wonderful poem!
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
8/2/2003 c1 74Letters to No One
I love it! This is really good! Keep up the good work and post some more soon. "Why just write... when you can post?"
74Letters to No OneI love it! This is really good! Keep up the good work and post some more soon. "Why just write... when you can post?"
7/31/2003 c1 49The Hitokiri Onigiri
*applauds* See, that wasn't so hard, was it? I still love this poem, whether anyone else does or not. Just don't lose heart, okay? Reviews take time. And plus, fools sometimes read and don't post their thoughts in the forms of reviews.
But I digress... AWESOME POEM! Are you going to post any more?
49The Hitokiri Onigiri*applauds* See, that wasn't so hard, was it? I still love this poem, whether anyone else does or not. Just don't lose heart, okay? Reviews take time. And plus, fools sometimes read and don't post their thoughts in the forms of reviews.
But I digress... AWESOME POEM! Are you going to post any more?