for The Stories the Spirits Told8/27/2005 c1 
16DevilDragon of Pain
I am a sucker for story poems. It touched my heart, and it was a very tender piece to read. It wasn't sad while I was reading it, but when I started to think about it in depth, I felt very sober, as if I'd just been to a funeral. Very good work. SCORE: 9/10
The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain
16DevilDragon of PainI am a sucker for story poems. It touched my heart, and it was a very tender piece to read. It wasn't sad while I was reading it, but when I started to think about it in depth, I felt very sober, as if I'd just been to a funeral. Very good work. SCORE: 9/10
The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain
9/19/2003 c1 wazawaisuru
KD, This poem is great! I really like it-I only wish I could write something as deep!
KD, This poem is great! I really like it-I only wish I could write something as deep!
8/12/2003 c1 2SkyAngeli
Hello...I luv your poem its so beautiful.. I wish I could write like that..but anyways..keep on writting! And be good!
2SkyAngeliHello...I luv your poem its so beautiful.. I wish I could write like that..but anyways..keep on writting! And be good!
7/30/2003 c1 17To Be Your Rockstar
ooh, i'm soo glad u posted this! I remember when u showed me this a while back! and of course, i Love it! especially the last 4 lines! my favorite part^_^ it's really good! I wish i had ur kind of talent-_-' lol^_^ anyway, keep up the gr8 work^_^
17To Be Your Rockstarooh, i'm soo glad u posted this! I remember when u showed me this a while back! and of course, i Love it! especially the last 4 lines! my favorite part^_^ it's really good! I wish i had ur kind of talent-_-' lol^_^ anyway, keep up the gr8 work^_^
7/30/2003 c1 11Sphynx
Oh! The poem! I was wondering (and hoping)when you were oging to post that. ^^
As I've told you before, I love this one. You have a talent for this kind of stuff...then again, you have a talent for most stuff. ^_^
Osamu: ...it's so SAD *bawls*
-_- DOn't mind him...I think he's going thorugh a phase. ^_^
Sphynx
11SphynxOh! The poem! I was wondering (and hoping)when you were oging to post that. ^^
As I've told you before, I love this one. You have a talent for this kind of stuff...then again, you have a talent for most stuff. ^_^
Osamu: ...it's so SAD *bawls*
-_- DOn't mind him...I think he's going thorugh a phase. ^_^
Sphynx