
2/21/2005 c1 Miranda Crystal-Bearer
Very sweet. I liked how the poem flows from one point of view to the other. Very smooth. Good job.
Very sweet. I liked how the poem flows from one point of view to the other. Very smooth. Good job.
9/15/2003 c1
8Angel of Southern Chicks
Very sad and sweet. There is a song called "Streets of Heaven" that deals with an issue similar to that

Very sad and sweet. There is a song called "Streets of Heaven" that deals with an issue similar to that
8/14/2003 c1
106cosmo-queen
This was so sad, and I liked how you included the view points of both the father and the daughter. Simple and touching, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

This was so sad, and I liked how you included the view points of both the father and the daughter. Simple and touching, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
7/31/2003 c1
49The Hitokiri Onigiri
Very sad, very touching... but I've already told you that. Can't wait to see more when you're ready to post them!

Very sad, very touching... but I've already told you that. Can't wait to see more when you're ready to post them!
7/30/2003 c1
74Letters to No One
That is so good, Skip. I think I know what it's about but I'm not sure. Fill me in sometime. I really like this one!

That is so good, Skip. I think I know what it's about but I'm not sure. Fill me in sometime. I really like this one!
7/30/2003 c1 Heidi Miller
Oh, wow. I fighting to keep the knot out of my throat. It's a very sweet poem, even better that there's actually meaning to it and that meaning is able to get across to those who read it. I loved it. Very well written.
~Heidi Miller
P.S. Read my story!
Oh, wow. I fighting to keep the knot out of my throat. It's a very sweet poem, even better that there's actually meaning to it and that meaning is able to get across to those who read it. I loved it. Very well written.
~Heidi Miller
P.S. Read my story!