for Petals8/14/2003 c1 Needa S
I'm not sure I understand your piece the ending confused me. But great job just the same. I am going to email you about a question you asked me on one of my poems. Sorry I took so long to reply. Thanks for the review. Keep writing..
I'm not sure I understand your piece the ending confused me. But great job just the same. I am going to email you about a question you asked me on one of my poems. Sorry I took so long to reply. Thanks for the review. Keep writing..
8/12/2003 c1 
25TylerB
its really short. and i really don't get it at all.
i'm not flameing at your poetry at all. but i never understood how much meaning or provoking of thoughts could come out of 3 lines of poetry.
well anyway sorry about that..
25TylerBits really short. and i really don't get it at all.
i'm not flameing at your poetry at all. but i never understood how much meaning or provoking of thoughts could come out of 3 lines of poetry.
well anyway sorry about that..
8/2/2003 c1 joie 610
nice poem :) makes me wanna go outside and appreciate flowers ;) seriously. dunno what to say except for good job!
nice poem :) makes me wanna go outside and appreciate flowers ;) seriously. dunno what to say except for good job!
7/30/2003 c1 5HighwayTantrum
The first two lines were very pretty, but the last line didn't make sense.
5HighwayTantrumThe first two lines were very pretty, but the last line didn't make sense.