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8/19/2003 c1 niphridel
Wow. Anyone who has a beautiful bestfriend can relate to this. You captured the experience of the "third wheel" perfectly. I especially like the line "But I'd rather not feel her heartbreak too".
8/18/2003 c1 32Arietti
Really, REALLY like the title, DA. It's very well written, and believe it or not, I absolutely LOVE poems that don't have a particular rhyme, especially when they tell a story! ^_^ I really liked this one because I can relate to the girl telling it, seeing how my best friend is this tall, gorgeous Miss Fairest of the Fair girl while I'm just here. *lol* But anyway, you keep writing, even if it was an old poem I LOVED it!

~Ari
8/13/2003 c1 3Tears of Atlantis
Hey Kendall! Once again you've succeeded in making a wonderful sweet, and sentimental poem. I was crying while i read it! I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure you were talking about me, so it really hit home. You're writing style is so powerful! Keep writing and I'll talk to you soon!

-Karina

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