for Hope and Despair8/21/2004 c1 
108Kirona of the skies
Wow, that totally rawks. Seriously. It rules. The flow is a tad bit awkward in a few places, but otherwise it's quite the fantastic work. ^_^ Awesome job!
108Kirona of the skiesWow, that totally rawks. Seriously. It rules. The flow is a tad bit awkward in a few places, but otherwise it's quite the fantastic work. ^_^ Awesome job!
7/26/2004 c1 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
Oh! o.o! This was very good, and I, myself, am a self proclaimed master of depressed poetry. XD Just kidding. Anywhoo . . . I liked it, except, there was one line that was a little off . . . one too many sylables . . . "Darkness will soon again begin to prevail." . . . Maybe I'm just crazy. o.O;; Your reviews really motivate me to write Greava . . . This is the least I can do for you!
148Moroni of the Mount of RoOh! o.o! This was very good, and I, myself, am a self proclaimed master of depressed poetry. XD Just kidding. Anywhoo . . . I liked it, except, there was one line that was a little off . . . one too many sylables . . . "Darkness will soon again begin to prevail." . . . Maybe I'm just crazy. o.O;; Your reviews really motivate me to write Greava . . . This is the least I can do for you!
7/1/2004 c1 AmazingBlazes
Woah...that was great. I don't know what more there is to say, except that the imagery in that poem was haunting. Good job!
Woah...that was great. I don't know what more there is to say, except that the imagery in that poem was haunting. Good job!
3/22/2004 c1 70insert name here
wow, i really like this, excellent job, vivid images as well as awesome flow, all in all this was a great poem
~brendz~
70insert name herewow, i really like this, excellent job, vivid images as well as awesome flow, all in all this was a great poem
~brendz~
3/7/2004 c1 4Lifes Riddles
Interesting. So your pesimistic (Did I spell that right?) I like the poem a lot. You deserve a fuge brownie for it. but I still like my quote.
There are, it has been said,
Two types of people in the world,
There are those who, when presented with a glass that is exactly half full say "This glass is half full",
And there are those who say this glass is half empty,
The world belongs however,to those who say "Excuse me. Excuse *me*. *This* is my glass? I don't *think* so. *My* glass was full, *and* it was a bigger glass."
-Terry Pratchet "The Truth"
4Lifes RiddlesInteresting. So your pesimistic (Did I spell that right?) I like the poem a lot. You deserve a fuge brownie for it. but I still like my quote.
There are, it has been said,
Two types of people in the world,
There are those who, when presented with a glass that is exactly half full say "This glass is half full",
And there are those who say this glass is half empty,
The world belongs however,to those who say "Excuse me. Excuse *me*. *This* is my glass? I don't *think* so. *My* glass was full, *and* it was a bigger glass."
-Terry Pratchet "The Truth"
2/18/2004 c1 42Riely Marie
wow! When my friend Enna said you were good... she wasn't lying! w00t... that's better then my stuff.. lol go read some of it pwetty pwease... and ill give you the dirt on Enna... lol she's my friend, I go to school with her so its all good... I know the good stuff...! Oh and your poem was great lol
42Riely Mariewow! When my friend Enna said you were good... she wasn't lying! w00t... that's better then my stuff.. lol go read some of it pwetty pwease... and ill give you the dirt on Enna... lol she's my friend, I go to school with her so its all good... I know the good stuff...! Oh and your poem was great lol
11/22/2003 c1 3FurballofEvilness
wow...this is amazing!
it really makes you wonder about it, and the way it works and goes in such a nice manner, it is just really awesome...wow. really, really good.
3FurballofEvilnesswow...this is amazing!
it really makes you wonder about it, and the way it works and goes in such a nice manner, it is just really awesome...wow. really, really good.
9/30/2003 c1 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
Nice poem. Oh yeah, if you want a do a "prequel" of smoke and releshenada go ahead.
6Belle the Shadow-CatNice poem. Oh yeah, if you want a do a "prequel" of smoke and releshenada go ahead.
8/23/2003 c1 11x-silent-tearz-x
Your poems kick ass. This is no exception. And you know what? NOW YOURE GOING ON MY FAVORITE AUTTHORS LIST DONT YOU FEEL SPECIAL! I'll get around to reading one of your stories soon.
11x-silent-tearz-xYour poems kick ass. This is no exception. And you know what? NOW YOURE GOING ON MY FAVORITE AUTTHORS LIST DONT YOU FEEL SPECIAL! I'll get around to reading one of your stories soon.
8/14/2003 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Aside from a jumbled flow at some parts, it's awesome. Great idea, and wonderfully written. The way you ended it in the last six or so lines was great. Great job
~Jess
Aside from a jumbled flow at some parts, it's awesome. Great idea, and wonderfully written. The way you ended it in the last six or so lines was great. Great job
~Jess
8/5/2003 c1 7AethraZip
So.. you would be a glass half-empty guy, yes?.. Well, so am I, so I can't talk.
7AethraZipSo.. you would be a glass half-empty guy, yes?.. Well, so am I, so I can't talk.
8/1/2003 c1 Alaurei
Wow. I'm not sure weather to say encouraging or depressing. Either will work because it was a beautiful poem that was extrodinarily written. Great job and welcome to fictionpress because I noticed you just signed up today. Looks like I get the first review for this poem. ~_^ That's cool. Just want to mention that, I have some great authors under my fav. authors list and I see you've already met one. Belle the Shadow-Cat. I think you signed up for her interactive story. *shrug* Anyhoo, great poem and I guess I agree with whichever way the person who is writting through opinion or fact, either will work, says. Sorry, I'm confusing myself and I bet I'm just confusing you too. I'll stop my blabbering. Thanks for reviewing Belle's story. ^_^ ttyl.
-Nickel City
ps. No pressure to go read my stuff. I don't really care.
and my motto...
"To infinity, and beyond!"
Wow. I'm not sure weather to say encouraging or depressing. Either will work because it was a beautiful poem that was extrodinarily written. Great job and welcome to fictionpress because I noticed you just signed up today. Looks like I get the first review for this poem. ~_^ That's cool. Just want to mention that, I have some great authors under my fav. authors list and I see you've already met one. Belle the Shadow-Cat. I think you signed up for her interactive story. *shrug* Anyhoo, great poem and I guess I agree with whichever way the person who is writting through opinion or fact, either will work, says. Sorry, I'm confusing myself and I bet I'm just confusing you too. I'll stop my blabbering. Thanks for reviewing Belle's story. ^_^ ttyl.
-Nickel City
ps. No pressure to go read my stuff. I don't really care.
and my motto...
"To infinity, and beyond!"