for Drunken Monkey King11/20/2010 c1 Echo
hehe. Nice one monkey king.
hehe. Nice one monkey king.
12/26/2004 c1 Shiko87
Love the ending line! It's just a great ending to the whole thing. I also liked how you put a bit of description as to the appearance of the Drunken Monkey King. I thought at first that it was a bit repetitive but that ending line makes it funny. Great job, and I'm intending to be back to read some of your stories too. Great poem!P.S. I don't drink and I still can't rhyme! So unfair... ^-^
Love the ending line! It's just a great ending to the whole thing. I also liked how you put a bit of description as to the appearance of the Drunken Monkey King. I thought at first that it was a bit repetitive but that ending line makes it funny. Great job, and I'm intending to be back to read some of your stories too. Great poem!P.S. I don't drink and I still can't rhyme! So unfair... ^-^
9/20/2004 c1 
14kit feral
Very random and odd but I liked it. The last line was very funny. I love random weirdness like this; you should write more of it!
14kit feralVery random and odd but I liked it. The last line was very funny. I love random weirdness like this; you should write more of it!
7/26/2004 c1 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
XD I love it! I wish I could write silly poetry. u.u Alas . . . I'll just read yours and Amazing Blazes'! ^_^ Your name in Oikush . . . Drunkoikus Monkoikus Kingoikus! ^_^ Now, I'm off to read more of your stories!
148Moroni of the Mount of RoXD I love it! I wish I could write silly poetry. u.u Alas . . . I'll just read yours and Amazing Blazes'! ^_^ Your name in Oikush . . . Drunkoikus Monkoikus Kingoikus! ^_^ Now, I'm off to read more of your stories!
7/1/2004 c1 AmazingBlazes
*giggles* This is funny! Although...smoking is bad for you! Other than that, yay! This made me laugh! Oh, and Oblivia is NOT a real country.
*giggles* This is funny! Although...smoking is bad for you! Other than that, yay! This made me laugh! Oh, and Oblivia is NOT a real country.
2/21/2004 c1 12RustPoisonedBlade
hahahahahahaa! that was great! Thanks,I needed a good laugh! *continues to laugh uncontrolably*
mwa!
12RustPoisonedBladehahahahahahaa! that was great! Thanks,I needed a good laugh! *continues to laugh uncontrolably*
mwa!
2/16/2004 c1 6Neonlights
this review is from Neonlights, We Could Be Gone and Fantasy 101.
THAT ROCKED all round.
i like the last line. very funny.
6Neonlightsthis review is from Neonlights, We Could Be Gone and Fantasy 101.
THAT ROCKED all round.
i like the last line. very funny.
2/13/2004 c1 Fragmented Skye
funny..just really funny..i liked this alot..now i must try to refrain myself from laughing..
funny..just really funny..i liked this alot..now i must try to refrain myself from laughing..
1/16/2004 c1 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
Insane of you. Thanks for the note. You'll be happy to now it Really WIll be up tonight. :)
6Belle the Shadow-CatInsane of you. Thanks for the note. You'll be happy to now it Really WIll be up tonight. :)
12/22/2003 c1 3Sillygoose49
That is so funny and cute! Something tells me you have a great sense of humor. I really like it.
3Sillygoose49That is so funny and cute! Something tells me you have a great sense of humor. I really like it.