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1/23/2005 c2 annoymous
I like the feel of this story. I can't wait to read the other chapter.
1/20/2005 c3 5the Inward Dreamer
I love how u put in things from real life, please finish this story! What does the locket mean? Does she ever get more sleep? Does she and Dan hook up? (that's a joke, but a suggestion too!) So many questions, please answer!
12/21/2004 c3 6R.M.Whitaker
Ha ha! That's funny, you ended both chapters the same way! lol, that's great.This book is awsome so far! I can only find one thing I don't much like about it. I REALY don't like cussing. Do it all you want yourself, but it ain't the wisest thing to do in a book. Here's a quote from one of my favorite authers, J.R.R. Tolkein:

"Swearing is the attempt of a lesser mind to express its self."

But hey, remember, I'm a very religious person. lol

Great chapter! Looking forward to another!
12/21/2004 c2 R.M.Whitaker
Whoa. I thought this was just a one-chapter thing to creep me out. I didn't know it was an actual story. Cool! Lookin' forward to it!
11/30/2004 c1 R.M.Whitaker
*shudders* kind of like a creepy version of Alice in Wonderland.
7/31/2003 c1 3Anthem Aeneid
FREAKY! THAT WAS AWESOME! KEEP WRITING STORIES PLEASE!

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