for Alive3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
i love this haiku. I think i get the real meaning to this...only objection-if u wish to use present tense, keep it all present tense. change 'kept' to 'keep'. That is all i have to say. Blabbermouth is shutting up.
i love this haiku. I think i get the real meaning to this...only objection-if u wish to use present tense, keep it all present tense. change 'kept' to 'keep'. That is all i have to say. Blabbermouth is shutting up.
1/5/2004 c1 KentzKid
Hey! I like the fact that you wrote a haiku, usually i read normal poems, but then i came across this haiku, and the title caught my eye :D poor widdle bwirdy:(
Keep writin,
Kentz~*~Kid~*~
Hey! I like the fact that you wrote a haiku, usually i read normal poems, but then i came across this haiku, and the title caught my eye :D poor widdle bwirdy:(
Keep writin,
Kentz~*~Kid~*~
8/17/2003 c1 
6AutuMnBrEeZe110
Very well written and I got the meaning. Like some people I like the last line.. to me that's the line that means the most. Great job!
6AutuMnBrEeZe110Very well written and I got the meaning. Like some people I like the last line.. to me that's the line that means the most. Great job!
8/14/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece! well written, i think i get the meaning. good job. keep on writing!
36obsidian katanagreat piece! well written, i think i get the meaning. good job. keep on writing!
8/2/2003 c1 ya know who
IT MEANS
If you got hope, you'll survive
cuz Hope is what keeps some of us alive.
ya know what I mean
I think it keeps everyone a live, ya know.
Haha
Whazup duck ::BITES OFF A CARROT HEAD::
IT MEANS
If you got hope, you'll survive
cuz Hope is what keeps some of us alive.
ya know what I mean
I think it keeps everyone a live, ya know.
Haha
Whazup duck ::BITES OFF A CARROT HEAD::
8/2/2003 c1 joie 610
i'm sure i got the meaning. i love how you portrayed it (the meaning) into a haiku about birds (well, it's not really only about birds, but, you know... i think... okay i'm confusing myself). good job, silver!
i'm sure i got the meaning. i love how you portrayed it (the meaning) into a haiku about birds (well, it's not really only about birds, but, you know... i think... okay i'm confusing myself). good job, silver!
8/1/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
o...so good...
i really love the last line and the idea of it all...man i bet you people could get a whole bunch of different ideas from these 3 small lines alone. it's amazing how poems can do that. good job
~color outside the lines~
4ColorCrayonso...so good...
i really love the last line and the idea of it all...man i bet you people could get a whole bunch of different ideas from these 3 small lines alone. it's amazing how poems can do that. good job
~color outside the lines~