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8/27/2004 c1 8hoochaty
its so sad for dat bird *sniff*
good haiku!
3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
i love this haiku. I think i get the real meaning to this...only objection-if u wish to use present tense, keep it all present tense. change 'kept' to 'keep'. That is all i have to say. Blabbermouth is shutting up.
1/5/2004 c1 KentzKid
Hey! I like the fact that you wrote a haiku, usually i read normal poems, but then i came across this haiku, and the title caught my eye :D poor widdle bwirdy:(
Keep writin,
9/5/2003 c1 57tofujunky
Poor Birdies.

Hope is what thrives us, very true.
8/17/2003 c1 6AutuMnBrEeZe110
Very well written and I got the meaning. Like some people I like the last line.. to me that's the line that means the most. Great job!
8/14/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece! well written, i think i get the meaning. good job. keep on writing!
8/12/2003 c1 7delighted delirium
OOh...I ilke it! Love the wording.
8/2/2003 c1 ya know who

If you got hope, you'll survive

cuz Hope is what keeps some of us alive.

ya know what I mean

I think it keeps everyone a live, ya know.


8/2/2003 c1 joie 610
i'm sure i got the meaning. i love how you portrayed it (the meaning) into a haiku about birds (well, it's not really only about birds, but, you know... i think... okay i'm confusing myself). good job, silver!
8/1/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
o...so good...

i really love the last line and the idea of it all...man i bet you people could get a whole bunch of different ideas from these 3 small lines alone. it's amazing how poems can do that. good job

~color outside the lines~
8/1/2003 c1 77thaiswirl
very nice i like this one alot
8/1/2003 c1 57teh tarik
I'm not sure if I got the maening right, but I liked the last line a lot.

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