for In Praise of the Earth9/4/2003 c1 sb friend
I never thought about the earth that way before. I think it is very nice but... strange caves...that just isn't something that you hear very often. I would say mysterious but you already used it. umm...majestic, alien, foreign (maybe not ...it gives you the wrong impression) peculiar, bizarre, curious, unusual, singular, queer, qrotesque, abnormal, remarkable, exotic, surprising. I know not all of these would work and i respect your views on the poem but that's the only little "thing" that bothers me. ( I have this little thing about editing things that are misspelled. My mom says that I wil definitely be a newspaper editor when i grow up)
I never thought about the earth that way before. I think it is very nice but... strange caves...that just isn't something that you hear very often. I would say mysterious but you already used it. umm...majestic, alien, foreign (maybe not ...it gives you the wrong impression) peculiar, bizarre, curious, unusual, singular, queer, qrotesque, abnormal, remarkable, exotic, surprising. I know not all of these would work and i respect your views on the poem but that's the only little "thing" that bothers me. ( I have this little thing about editing things that are misspelled. My mom says that I wil definitely be a newspaper editor when i grow up)
9/1/2003 c1 ZealWarrior
This poem is absolute brilliance. No, that's not an overstatement because if you read my profile you would see that I adore nature. And I just love poetry of nature, and in this you have captured it beautifully. The final three lines;
"I want nothing other
Than to learn the concepts and thoughts
Of my planetary mother."
were just great. No this isn't an embellishment, I really love this poem! And I'm so glad that you love classical music and nature like me. Funny thing really, this reading was further enhanced because I was listening to Strauss's On the Beautiful Blue Danube Waltz while reading it. Quite the surreal experience, I thought. Well please keep it up, and I will read more!
This poem is absolute brilliance. No, that's not an overstatement because if you read my profile you would see that I adore nature. And I just love poetry of nature, and in this you have captured it beautifully. The final three lines;
"I want nothing other
Than to learn the concepts and thoughts
Of my planetary mother."
were just great. No this isn't an embellishment, I really love this poem! And I'm so glad that you love classical music and nature like me. Funny thing really, this reading was further enhanced because I was listening to Strauss's On the Beautiful Blue Danube Waltz while reading it. Quite the surreal experience, I thought. Well please keep it up, and I will read more!
8/24/2003 c1 
10Hikarineko Skadi
This poem is the best poem i ever read about eatrh. I liked this poem alot you should write more poems you are good at it. And don't lose your touch.
~kari
10Hikarineko SkadiThis poem is the best poem i ever read about eatrh. I liked this poem alot you should write more poems you are good at it. And don't lose your touch.
~kari