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6/9/2006 c1 178FigureItOut
Well, speaking as one of the people who have you on my unofficial favorites list, I must say that your leaving would be unfortunate. Yes, I agree that writing can become an embarrassment, especially since we write what we feel. But as we grow older our feelings change, hence the change in our style of writing. I think maybe you should allow your style to change instead of abandoning you early writing out of shame. This is just a suggestion, but think on it.
8/13/2003 c1 15Dark-BlueDeep
"always half of a step(higher/lower) more than you'd have gone, had the choice been yours. (but is it ever? Yours, that is."

My god, that blew me away. As did this. Made me gulp.

Seriously good.

FG
8/4/2003 c1 26sweetspontaneous
reading this made me catch my breath...love the rhyme on ever/never, the half-rhyme on done and gone...precise and effective in very few words- stunning.
8/2/2003 c1 creatureofnite
Artistic.

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