
8/2/2003 c1
14selah
Nicely done.:) Like the reviewer before me, i also think this poem sounds empowering. Now IF we all have the guts to do it...that's a whole 'nother poem in itself.
keep writing : )
selah~

Nicely done.:) Like the reviewer before me, i also think this poem sounds empowering. Now IF we all have the guts to do it...that's a whole 'nother poem in itself.
keep writing : )
selah~
8/2/2003 c1
30Haley Kathleen Moss
"All while acting as of nothing wrong"
Perhaps supposed to be if?
But that is the only error I can see. It's is wonderful. Makes you want to stand on the mountaintops and shout your beliefs to the world. Lovely.

"All while acting as of nothing wrong"
Perhaps supposed to be if?
But that is the only error I can see. It's is wonderful. Makes you want to stand on the mountaintops and shout your beliefs to the world. Lovely.