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3/14/2006 c1 131theory of black
Wow, I'm so sorry for your misfortune.
5/5/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
The Bible verse gives you hope. Very nice job in describing yourself with so few words.
1/14/2005 c1 79Summerdazed
wow...you can write a poem of single words and get your message across, i'm impressed!

2/21/2004 c1 3DHABUZ
nice well written
2/21/2004 c1 22MadMorrow
A definite look into her feeling, a ragged feeling of her emotions being played in her head.
I think it could be expanded a bit. Maybe have a sentence after each word, each feeling, in order to put more into what it really means to that person.
Regarding your question on spacing. I've used MS Word to write my poems, then I use the space bar to indent them. I save it in the html format for upload - sometimes it doesn't work for indentation, usually it does.
8/3/2003 c1 58Next Exit
i like that you added a verse at the end of your poem. and the words, very descriptive adn true. kudos on that, but its not really a poem. with those words i'm sure you'll find a true piece within you.


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