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9/30/2003 c1 26wordpainter241
I hate it when I feel this way which is most of the time so I guess I just hate it: which is pretty much an accurate summary of how I feel.

Yes I agree, summaries suck.
9/29/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
superb... you know how much we love the simple stuff... this is no exception.

i'm liking your whole theme here, i see a pattern emerging...
8/30/2003 c1 47The intellect
cool and short...

''Nothing but a testament''

i love this part, seems as its a struggle to religion or just a story in a religious way.

intellect
8/25/2003 c1 psycho tabby cat
Aw Nasty

I know how u feel about summaries, they are a pain in the neak to write.

Its funny how so few words can have such a strong meaning when strung together in the right way.

I really enjoy a good poem that rhymes and is understandable and this definatly fits into that catergory.

Well written, Thanks,

D
8/10/2003 c1 meudick
i like. can't be bothered to login-slash-talk in proper sentences. biv was good. lay around in bush a lot. had lots of fun. tired. assignment to do for tomorrow. call u l8r. should have come. fun. goodnight...

ps i like
8/7/2003 c1 8HNMN Commander for the Right
Hey this is just a response to your review of my poem, "Thank You". "Primitive" may have been a little harsh I think, but don't apologize. You told me what you really thought, and that's the best kind of review I can get.

-hnmn
8/3/2003 c1 4Pink Roses
one of the few rhyming poems i have read that actually makes sense.

nice.

-ab

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