10/8/2003 c1 7PJs1867
This is good but needs a correction in the 3rd verse and it has powerful words but it didn't give me much emotion as a reader. Keep writing you have potential and thanks for reviewing my work!
This is good but needs a correction in the 3rd verse and it has powerful words but it didn't give me much emotion as a reader. Keep writing you have potential and thanks for reviewing my work!
9/23/2003 c1 56missmassu
I like this. I really do!
I love it!
Thanks for reviewing mine.
I really don't care about it if you tell me if the stuff is bad, I'm okay with it. I know somebody had to tell me someday I was bad. But I understand. Keep writing. I'm putting this story on my favorites list!
ByE~
~JunJin-Lover~
I like this. I really do!
I love it!
Thanks for reviewing mine.
I really don't care about it if you tell me if the stuff is bad, I'm okay with it. I know somebody had to tell me someday I was bad. But I understand. Keep writing. I'm putting this story on my favorites list!
ByE~
~JunJin-Lover~