for Guided By7/17/2010 c10 
39Finwe
I think sometimes your descriptions kind of get away with you in this story, leaving a somewhat muddled feeling. However, I like the overall storyline, and how different you were able to make it from your other "angel" stories. (It's not "just another story".) =) I would like to see more. I'm especially interested in Laine's character, and how he will change, now that he's remembered his true self and purpose.
Good work!
39FinweI think sometimes your descriptions kind of get away with you in this story, leaving a somewhat muddled feeling. However, I like the overall storyline, and how different you were able to make it from your other "angel" stories. (It's not "just another story".) =) I would like to see more. I'm especially interested in Laine's character, and how he will change, now that he's remembered his true self and purpose.
Good work!
7/10/2010 c2 Finwe
Another fascinating read! Can't wait to continue, but bed beckons. =) Oh! Is the red-brown word you're looking for "russet"?
Another fascinating read! Can't wait to continue, but bed beckons. =) Oh! Is the red-brown word you're looking for "russet"?
8/7/2006 c10 78chrnoskitty
It's been almost 2 years since this story was updated... any chance on getting it updated this year?
I reallyl, really am in awe with this story... and would love to see it continued.
Keep up the great work!
78chrnoskittyIt's been almost 2 years since this story was updated... any chance on getting it updated this year?
I reallyl, really am in awe with this story... and would love to see it continued.
Keep up the great work!
5/30/2006 c10 52Liviania
Really great story! It's very absorbing, and you're really quickly pulled into the characters, no matter how odd they are.
Livi
52LivianiaReally great story! It's very absorbing, and you're really quickly pulled into the characters, no matter how odd they are.
Livi
5/29/2006 c1 2Naoji
This is a really amazing story! I love your writing style too, thx for the review!-Naoji
2NaojiThis is a really amazing story! I love your writing style too, thx for the review!-Naoji
3/27/2005 c10 1Hazard
please please please continue- 4 months of waiting is lethal to any psyche- especially when things are so close to making sense!
1Hazardplease please please continue- 4 months of waiting is lethal to any psyche- especially when things are so close to making sense!
12/17/2004 c10 Noriko M. Chijinu
Brilliantly done! It's coming to the action-y part!
Cannot wait for more! :3
Brilliantly done! It's coming to the action-y part!
Cannot wait for more! :3
12/10/2004 c10 9r.mai
WOW. every single time you release a chapter i'm awed and overwhelmed. it's like gosh ... your writing is so beautiful, elegant, moving ... but i can't grasp it ... it isn't tangible ... yay for the update. ^^ it's just ... wow haha. i really can't express it in words at the moment. well, i gotta go back to drawing and then sleep in a bit since i already missed one night of sleep. thanks for the chapter update. it just ... invigorated me? dunno. well, see you next chapter!
9r.maiWOW. every single time you release a chapter i'm awed and overwhelmed. it's like gosh ... your writing is so beautiful, elegant, moving ... but i can't grasp it ... it isn't tangible ... yay for the update. ^^ it's just ... wow haha. i really can't express it in words at the moment. well, i gotta go back to drawing and then sleep in a bit since i already missed one night of sleep. thanks for the chapter update. it just ... invigorated me? dunno. well, see you next chapter!
12/9/2004 c10 5Seirvitas
Once more you have completely enamored me with your wonderful storytelling capabilities. My heart has been captured by this particular story more so than any others. It seems your descriptions and vocabulary only get more beautiful with every installment of your stories and plotlines tug at my heart and draw me in like no other author. I mean it from the bottom of my heart when I say you are my favorite author, because only you can make me feel so many emotions at once. Only you have made something this beautiful even out of the most painful of emotions. I hurt with your characters, cry and scream with your characters, and they come to life. Each has more than just a story; they have a soul. Everything that has happened in this chapter only serves to leave me in awe and bewilderment, heart racing and mind blurring with uncertainty for the fates of your characters. Lain particularly seems to be important to me, because he seems so weak and strong all together, and simply feels like something so much more powerful and holy than us, than anything, like a savior. All of the events that came out in this chapter overwhelmed me with a sense of worry and contentment both, and I have faith that the next chapter will only be all the more wonderful. Keep writing because you will get somewhere. You are truly talented and I’ll always love your stories. Thank you for sharing pieces of yourself with us through your masterful storytelling and take your time. This chapter may have been slow to update but it was well worth the wait.
5SeirvitasOnce more you have completely enamored me with your wonderful storytelling capabilities. My heart has been captured by this particular story more so than any others. It seems your descriptions and vocabulary only get more beautiful with every installment of your stories and plotlines tug at my heart and draw me in like no other author. I mean it from the bottom of my heart when I say you are my favorite author, because only you can make me feel so many emotions at once. Only you have made something this beautiful even out of the most painful of emotions. I hurt with your characters, cry and scream with your characters, and they come to life. Each has more than just a story; they have a soul. Everything that has happened in this chapter only serves to leave me in awe and bewilderment, heart racing and mind blurring with uncertainty for the fates of your characters. Lain particularly seems to be important to me, because he seems so weak and strong all together, and simply feels like something so much more powerful and holy than us, than anything, like a savior. All of the events that came out in this chapter overwhelmed me with a sense of worry and contentment both, and I have faith that the next chapter will only be all the more wonderful. Keep writing because you will get somewhere. You are truly talented and I’ll always love your stories. Thank you for sharing pieces of yourself with us through your masterful storytelling and take your time. This chapter may have been slow to update but it was well worth the wait.
12/8/2004 c10 Guest
I was confused last chapter...now I'm not! GREAT update. I LOVE YOU
I was confused last chapter...now I'm not! GREAT update. I LOVE YOU
12/7/2004 c10 2Dream Fox
This has gotten so interesting, especially with that twist of Laine! Please continue!
2Dream FoxThis has gotten so interesting, especially with that twist of Laine! Please continue!
12/5/2004 c10 19NotEnough
Well, this has made me confused, but then has kind of uncofused me at the same time. Which isn't really possible, i know, but that's what it's done!
I don't understand what will happen if Laine does save Brennan. I mean, will he go back to being whatever it was he was before, or will he stay with Brennan.
That's of course if Brennan can be saved.
Please let him be saved...
I want Laine to be happy. Let him be happy, PLEASE!
Well, brilliant as always, update sooner? Soon infact!
19NotEnoughWell, this has made me confused, but then has kind of uncofused me at the same time. Which isn't really possible, i know, but that's what it's done!
I don't understand what will happen if Laine does save Brennan. I mean, will he go back to being whatever it was he was before, or will he stay with Brennan.
That's of course if Brennan can be saved.
Please let him be saved...
I want Laine to be happy. Let him be happy, PLEASE!
Well, brilliant as always, update sooner? Soon infact!