for Guided By11/9/2004 c9 
1Avigail-Lane
Amazing Edana! Beautiful, wonderful, amazing work... I really love this story. I've grown so attached to it - haha.
I have to say that I really can't find a flaw in your work. Atleast, to me it is rather near perfect. The basic structure is very very nice, grammer is very nice, plot, everything - very nice.
I just can't get over how wonderful this story is, the entire idea.. ahh.. and I love the ending of th 9th chapter.
*hugs* Thanks for bringing a story like this into my life Edana. haha. Good Luck and keep up the fabulous work!
1Avigail-LaneAmazing Edana! Beautiful, wonderful, amazing work... I really love this story. I've grown so attached to it - haha.
I have to say that I really can't find a flaw in your work. Atleast, to me it is rather near perfect. The basic structure is very very nice, grammer is very nice, plot, everything - very nice.
I just can't get over how wonderful this story is, the entire idea.. ahh.. and I love the ending of th 9th chapter.
*hugs* Thanks for bringing a story like this into my life Edana. haha. Good Luck and keep up the fabulous work!
7/28/2004 c9 centi it wont let me log in
Edana-sama this was just so amazing and well worth the wait. I've been dying for an updated more than you could even believe, but I'm so happy you took your time on this. I knew there was something up with Laine, but I did NOT expect what had happened. You always keep me on my toes, wondering where things are going to lead, and always falling more and more in love with your characters. Strangely I'm starting to really fall in love with Kyrie. Leave it to me to fall for the misguided villian. I also feel sorry for Haden in my own way and I'm REALLY worried for our own little raven. AHH! So much angst kills me but I love it so much and you are so good at it. Oh yeah I about died when I saw the big reccomendation on your main page so I decided to mirror the favor, seeing as how I worship you and all hehe. Updated forsaken too just so you know. Your update inspired me (just the update, not reading it, but the pure excitement of knowing there was more Guided by to read) Okay I'm wierd. Luv you.
Centi
Edana-sama this was just so amazing and well worth the wait. I've been dying for an updated more than you could even believe, but I'm so happy you took your time on this. I knew there was something up with Laine, but I did NOT expect what had happened. You always keep me on my toes, wondering where things are going to lead, and always falling more and more in love with your characters. Strangely I'm starting to really fall in love with Kyrie. Leave it to me to fall for the misguided villian. I also feel sorry for Haden in my own way and I'm REALLY worried for our own little raven. AHH! So much angst kills me but I love it so much and you are so good at it. Oh yeah I about died when I saw the big reccomendation on your main page so I decided to mirror the favor, seeing as how I worship you and all hehe. Updated forsaken too just so you know. Your update inspired me (just the update, not reading it, but the pure excitement of knowing there was more Guided by to read) Okay I'm wierd. Luv you.
Centi
7/27/2004 c1 DarkSorceress
Okay, I am back...here goes...
-So far, really liking Laine. The powers thing adds to his character I feel, and I think that you have developed him wonderfully.
-So much mystery, and excellently done if I have not said so before. I am really wondering what is up with Laine, how they own him, and, well, alot of things...
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-"Laine couldn’t take any of this for much longer – the suspense was killing him"...I know how he feels, the suspence is killing me as well
-"You do know that’s for boosting your sex appeal, don’t you?”...I guess he is just one sexy guy...
-I really like the whole semi-precious stone usage thing...I have always been facsinated by it, but I never truly concidered putting it into a story...anyways, great job!
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-There seems to be alot of spontaniousness about having psychic powers...which I suppose is only logicall
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Argh, you ended it there! *tear*...I have to read more. All I have to say is excellent- that and that I think that this chapter maybe should have been three instead. That is just what I think, feel free to scream at me if you believe otherwise.
Anyways, onto the next chapter!
Okay, I am back...here goes...
-So far, really liking Laine. The powers thing adds to his character I feel, and I think that you have developed him wonderfully.
-So much mystery, and excellently done if I have not said so before. I am really wondering what is up with Laine, how they own him, and, well, alot of things...
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-"Laine couldn’t take any of this for much longer – the suspense was killing him"...I know how he feels, the suspence is killing me as well
-"You do know that’s for boosting your sex appeal, don’t you?”...I guess he is just one sexy guy...
-I really like the whole semi-precious stone usage thing...I have always been facsinated by it, but I never truly concidered putting it into a story...anyways, great job!
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-There seems to be alot of spontaniousness about having psychic powers...which I suppose is only logicall
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Argh, you ended it there! *tear*...I have to read more. All I have to say is excellent- that and that I think that this chapter maybe should have been three instead. That is just what I think, feel free to scream at me if you believe otherwise.
Anyways, onto the next chapter!
7/27/2004 c9 1Rose Castello
This is beautiful, I never would heav read this if I hadn't read another one of your stories called Fallen. this is beautiful and mysterious. Keep going.
1Rose CastelloThis is beautiful, I never would heav read this if I hadn't read another one of your stories called Fallen. this is beautiful and mysterious. Keep going.
7/27/2004 c9 9r.mai
oh... okay, so he's NOT a descendent... i was wondering about his pain soothing taking in thingie... cuz brennan didn't seem like he could do it... he always kept getting hurt and losing a sense... i hope you update soon! it's all adrenaline packed! *pats kyrie and glomps brennan* don't touch him you pervie! XD
9r.maioh... okay, so he's NOT a descendent... i was wondering about his pain soothing taking in thingie... cuz brennan didn't seem like he could do it... he always kept getting hurt and losing a sense... i hope you update soon! it's all adrenaline packed! *pats kyrie and glomps brennan* don't touch him you pervie! XD
7/27/2004 c8 r.mai
i don't get it lol. is laine a descendent too? o.O nu! *glomps Brennan* don't touch him! he's NOT tarin! XD
i don't get it lol. is laine a descendent too? o.O nu! *glomps Brennan* don't touch him! he's NOT tarin! XD
7/26/2004 c1 10DarkSorceress
I made a promise to always return reviews...I apologize that it took me a year to do so in this case...
"But, like a siren his beauty only lead to destruction one way or another."... I really like that line.
Descriptions are excellent, and your use of wording flows very well. You have done a wonderful job of introducing your characters into the story, and I (as I am sure many others have) must say that I am beginning to like Haden (and I am only a few paragraphs in).
I like the mystery that you put in around...uh...'whatever Haden did to the woman'...Right now my thoughts are that he is a vampire of some sort...but then you may always surprise me.
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Your men seem to have an obsession with eyeliner...
Colour! Yes! Finally spelled right!
Alot of mystery behind your characters, but mystery is always good and well enjoyed (by myself at least).
Anyways, I got to go for now (I was beginning to like Laine so much), so I will anonymusly review the rest tommorow, and I am also going to put it on my favs...
10DarkSorceressI made a promise to always return reviews...I apologize that it took me a year to do so in this case...
"But, like a siren his beauty only lead to destruction one way or another."... I really like that line.
Descriptions are excellent, and your use of wording flows very well. You have done a wonderful job of introducing your characters into the story, and I (as I am sure many others have) must say that I am beginning to like Haden (and I am only a few paragraphs in).
I like the mystery that you put in around...uh...'whatever Haden did to the woman'...Right now my thoughts are that he is a vampire of some sort...but then you may always surprise me.
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Your men seem to have an obsession with eyeliner...
Colour! Yes! Finally spelled right!
Alot of mystery behind your characters, but mystery is always good and well enjoyed (by myself at least).
Anyways, I got to go for now (I was beginning to like Laine so much), so I will anonymusly review the rest tommorow, and I am also going to put it on my favs...
7/25/2004 c9 2Dream Fox
This is so cool! Laine's so awsome! So, he's the original, huh? Interesting... This should prove to lead to intruiging plot twists...
2Dream FoxThis is so cool! Laine's so awsome! So, he's the original, huh? Interesting... This should prove to lead to intruiging plot twists...
7/25/2004 c9 1DKiplan
Yay! I love this story and things are starting to come together. I'm so worried about Brennan. I wish someone would hurry and rescue him before things get much worst. I still love Kyrie. I'm ticked at him, disgusted with him at times, but I still love him. Why is he doing this to himself I wonder. Poor Kyrie, Brennan and Laine. I've been trying to figure out exactly what Laine was and now its finally reveal though I still want more explaining to see exactly what his role is and why he can't remember. Great update and I look forward to the next one.
1DKiplanYay! I love this story and things are starting to come together. I'm so worried about Brennan. I wish someone would hurry and rescue him before things get much worst. I still love Kyrie. I'm ticked at him, disgusted with him at times, but I still love him. Why is he doing this to himself I wonder. Poor Kyrie, Brennan and Laine. I've been trying to figure out exactly what Laine was and now its finally reveal though I still want more explaining to see exactly what his role is and why he can't remember. Great update and I look forward to the next one.
7/25/2004 c9 LadyDragon
hey! i liked your story even though the parings are m/m (i'm trying to find a decent fic that is not like that) but still i like it. it stirred emotion in me. keep up the good work. i'll be looking forward to another one of your chapters.
hey! i liked your story even though the parings are m/m (i'm trying to find a decent fic that is not like that) but still i like it. it stirred emotion in me. keep up the good work. i'll be looking forward to another one of your chapters.
7/24/2004 c9 KoaruFan
... I would have had a heartattck on the spot. o_o
... I would have had a heartattck on the spot. o_o
7/24/2004 c9 9DiamondKing
Well, I didn't see this coming. Strange, but it is somehow making sense...in a strange way.
9DiamondKingWell, I didn't see this coming. Strange, but it is somehow making sense...in a strange way.
7/22/2004 c9 Nobody85
O_O... Okay, that was an ending I didn't expect. ^_^;;
Yet another great chapter! I can't wait for the next!
O_O... Okay, that was an ending I didn't expect. ^_^;;
Yet another great chapter! I can't wait for the next!