4/15/2004 c8 15Neechi
Aww! Ending? Already? I suppose stories have to do that. Ah... Not reviewing to good tonight, eh? ^-^ Love the story, love your work, love Laine (but he's not mine, is he?) ^-^
~Nee
Aww! Ending? Already? I suppose stories have to do that. Ah... Not reviewing to good tonight, eh? ^-^ Love the story, love your work, love Laine (but he's not mine, is he?) ^-^
~Nee
4/14/2004 c8 ddz008
OH! I have to read the next chapter! I need to understand this completely! Everything is just so twisted :S
Keep writing! You stories are GREAT!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
OH! I have to read the next chapter! I need to understand this completely! Everything is just so twisted :S
Keep writing! You stories are GREAT!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
4/14/2004 c1 Lunar Wulf Gemini
Wow... Incredible. Nice twist. This is good.This is amazing, dark and dramatic. Update soon please.
Wow... Incredible. Nice twist. This is good.This is amazing, dark and dramatic. Update soon please.
4/14/2004 c8 9DiamondKing
Great chappie! I'm hoping that this stoey doesn't end sadly, but I got a feeling that it might.
Great chappie! I'm hoping that this stoey doesn't end sadly, but I got a feeling that it might.
4/14/2004 c8 1DKiplan
Poor Brennan and I actually feel sorry for Kyrie. I keep hoping he'll come back to his senses. All he really needs is a hug and for everyone to forgive him, right? I know, wistful thinking. Still its a great stroy. Excitedly waiting for the next chapter.
Poor Brennan and I actually feel sorry for Kyrie. I keep hoping he'll come back to his senses. All he really needs is a hug and for everyone to forgive him, right? I know, wistful thinking. Still its a great stroy. Excitedly waiting for the next chapter.
4/14/2004 c8 Nobody85
I don't even know what to say... This chapter was amazing on so many levels. I love how you can write such exciting battle scenes; making the reader feel and experience each action... And then leaving the battle and give a feeling of calm. o_o...
If you ever get published, I'm gonna be first in line to buy your books. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
I don't even know what to say... This chapter was amazing on so many levels. I love how you can write such exciting battle scenes; making the reader feel and experience each action... And then leaving the battle and give a feeling of calm. o_o...
If you ever get published, I'm gonna be first in line to buy your books. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/27/2004 c7 1AngelxRose
It's very good. characters are very well developed and plot is exciting and unpredictable. makes me wanna read more! Please continue. ^_^
It's very good. characters are very well developed and plot is exciting and unpredictable. makes me wanna read more! Please continue. ^_^
3/9/2004 c7 5Seirvitas
OO I'm falling in love with Haden, how twisted is that. Some part of me wants to hug him and help him find some comfort despite his twisted and decaying mind. I'm also loving everyone more and feeling bad for all of them. It seems not a one of them isn't sufferring including kyrie, but I feel most bad for Haden. He really did love Tarin, you can tell. Even now (cries) though his love had become twisted and warped he still loves him. AND WHAT A CLIFFHANGER! You are so damned good at them. Its like, paw screen must have more drool die. Um okay I sound silly and incompetant now. Anyway I luvvies you so much for writing all this. You always make me die with amazement with every chapter you write and make me wanna draw your characters. In fact I've been in a coloring mood so maybe I'll finally finish that picture of kit and his family n_n NYAA And I think I'll make a pedestal to you on deviantart. Sounds like a plan to me XD.
~Centi
OO I'm falling in love with Haden, how twisted is that. Some part of me wants to hug him and help him find some comfort despite his twisted and decaying mind. I'm also loving everyone more and feeling bad for all of them. It seems not a one of them isn't sufferring including kyrie, but I feel most bad for Haden. He really did love Tarin, you can tell. Even now (cries) though his love had become twisted and warped he still loves him. AND WHAT A CLIFFHANGER! You are so damned good at them. Its like, paw screen must have more drool die. Um okay I sound silly and incompetant now. Anyway I luvvies you so much for writing all this. You always make me die with amazement with every chapter you write and make me wanna draw your characters. In fact I've been in a coloring mood so maybe I'll finally finish that picture of kit and his family n_n NYAA And I think I'll make a pedestal to you on deviantart. Sounds like a plan to me XD.
~Centi
3/6/2004 c7 ddz008
GREAT!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
It's so dark and interesting...
I need to read the next chapter!
Keep writing!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
GREAT!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
It's so dark and interesting...
I need to read the next chapter!
Keep writing!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
3/6/2004 c7 16ola
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oh no...
get out of there you idiots! quick!...
don't let them die! please! they got to stay together. and alive!
is that haden? or some other immortal?
please update soon!
great work! loved it! =)
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oh no...
get out of there you idiots! quick!...
don't let them die! please! they got to stay together. and alive!
is that haden? or some other immortal?
please update soon!
great work! loved it! =)
3/3/2004 c7 9r.mai
oh shiz nittzle! how the hell are they gonna get out of that mess ... aiya yi ... hope you update soon! cya!
oh shiz nittzle! how the hell are they gonna get out of that mess ... aiya yi ... hope you update soon! cya!
3/2/2004 c7 KoaruFan
wah~! you end every chapter with me wanting so much more~! never a dull moment. *feels sorry for Laine* I wouldn't have the will to get through something like that. I'd just roll over and die. ^^; *kissu for Brennan and Laine*
wah~! you end every chapter with me wanting so much more~! never a dull moment. *feels sorry for Laine* I wouldn't have the will to get through something like that. I'd just roll over and die. ^^; *kissu for Brennan and Laine*