for Rainy Dayz1/23/2006 c1 NOT A PERVERT
omgsh, i love your story! I'm not pervert but the way it is written is just amazing. alexander sounds sweet in the last few chapters. i'm amazed Lilly would lie like that, she seemed so innocent and timid in the first few chapters
omgsh, i love your story! I'm not pervert but the way it is written is just amazing. alexander sounds sweet in the last few chapters. i'm amazed Lilly would lie like that, she seemed so innocent and timid in the first few chapters
1/23/2006 c10 someone
great! ^_~ continue!i think Lilly is an idiot xP lol
great! ^_~ continue!i think Lilly is an idiot xP lol
9/10/2005 c1 axiden
Oh my god! Love your stories so much! I'm not a sex maniac or something...Just like how you write it...please write as fast as possible please...By the way, I love Alexander better than Xaiver
Oh my god! Love your stories so much! I'm not a sex maniac or something...Just like how you write it...please write as fast as possible please...By the way, I love Alexander better than Xaiver
3/24/2005 c10 Kane
Finish writing the next chapter! Can't...resist...must...read...story...too...good... You have a confusing but smart thinking plot!
Finish writing the next chapter! Can't...resist...must...read...story...too...good... You have a confusing but smart thinking plot!
2/21/2005 c10 ItalianQT
Lilly definitly made things worse by lying... You've got an interesting story so far... Update soon! : )
Lilly definitly made things worse by lying... You've got an interesting story so far... Update soon! : )
12/7/2004 c10 Jess
Please continue soon! Can't wait to read what happen next!
Please continue soon! Can't wait to read what happen next!
7/22/2004 c10 
1SiobhanO
kool story man! xaiver and lilly should deffinatly get 2gether...kill his ex ifu have 2(no offense towards ur character) lol
1SiobhanOkool story man! xaiver and lilly should deffinatly get 2gether...kill his ex ifu have 2(no offense towards ur character) lol
7/17/2004 c10 13Klanfer
Good so far... *screals* I basically try to skim over explicit stuff... no offense... it's just me i guess. i like your story line thought... i totally dig Alexander!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAhAHAHA..*Does crazy reviewer dance*
ruN FROM THE CHEESIES!
THEY ARE MINE I TELL YA! MINE!
13KlanferGood so far... *screals* I basically try to skim over explicit stuff... no offense... it's just me i guess. i like your story line thought... i totally dig Alexander!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAhAHAHA..*Does crazy reviewer dance*
ruN FROM THE CHEESIES!
THEY ARE MINE I TELL YA! MINE!
5/23/2004 c9 JY
YOU FINALLY UPDATED! YAY! Update SOON =)lovin it
YOU FINALLY UPDATED! YAY! Update SOON =)lovin it
4/30/2004 c3 DancingButterfly
"Look son I won't disapprove of this but be gentle with her. If you found her on the street chances are she'll be a bit shy." He gave his son a warm smile trying to encourage him.
^what, what shy? im thinking maybe no, if this were normal and u found a girl on the street you'd might think shes a hooker in trouble or something but anything BUT shy
"Look son I won't disapprove of this but be gentle with her. If you found her on the street chances are she'll be a bit shy." He gave his son a warm smile trying to encourage him.
^what, what shy? im thinking maybe no, if this were normal and u found a girl on the street you'd might think shes a hooker in trouble or something but anything BUT shy
4/27/2004 c8 Black Panthera
This is quite good story, I like it. Well I think Lily shouldn't forgive Xaiver, at least not quickly...
This is quite good story, I like it. Well I think Lily shouldn't forgive Xaiver, at least not quickly...