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12/24/2004 c1 4rightblinkleft
ah scry cat! hahaha... i no this cat dats jus tlike dat, cept it has a brown body and a blakc head and andndndndndndnd IT WENT THROUGH THE DOOR I SWEAR IT WENT THROUGH THE DOOR... but wow, nice descriptions... vry itesetg keep ritin homes
8/8/2004 c1 5Thepolia
I especially like the last line. I think there can be a better word than 'electric', but right now I can't think of one yet.
8/10/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
I don't really like cats, prefer dogs but this is a really nice haiku!
8/7/2003 c1 20Deadwind
::hugs the cat::

You won't mind if I steal him? Lol, great job on describing your cat! It makes me want one of my own!
8/6/2003 c1 57teh tarik
Great description! I especially liked the part about "electric gren eyes reflecting the sky".
8/4/2003 c1 2OJW
Hey! THis was a really Nice poem

I like the Electric Green eyes. Hahaha

The poem paints an observant Cat in my mind..

Well done!
8/3/2003 c1 joie 610
DAHLIA!

YAY, YOU GOT IT TO WORK! SMART GIRL *HUGS* LUV YA SO MUCH AND I MISS YOU! WOO HOO, THREE REVIEWS ALREADY! WAY TO GO! WE BOTH HAVE TO PUT UP LOTS MORE STORIES, OKAY? YOU BETTER DO THAT! OH AND BTW... TO PEOPLE READING THIS... THE POEM IS SUPPOSED TO BE TWO HAIKUS PUT TOGETHER... SO DON'T FORGET THE BEAT!

WE NEED MORE, MS. MOORE!
8/3/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
interesting poem. :)
8/3/2003 c1 77thaiswirl
i love your description of your cat i can picture him perfectly...

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