for Desolate Slumber8/3/2003 c1 
22miley13
Wow, beautiful poem. It really reminds me of my life, and what has happened over the past year. Brilliant descriptions, they truly fit the nature of this poem. Keep writing!
~miley13~
22miley13Wow, beautiful poem. It really reminds me of my life, and what has happened over the past year. Brilliant descriptions, they truly fit the nature of this poem. Keep writing!
~miley13~
8/3/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
wow! this piece is utterly amazing. left me in complete and utter awe. I especially liked the whole "My sould wanders in unvoiced wonderment..." stanza.I wish I could write so beautifully...you're making me green over here. because you're younger than me, I don't think I've ever read a piece by someone younger than me that just made my jaw drop.
once again, very very nicely done. keep up the good work.
-Tormented Romantic-
63Tormented Romanticwow! this piece is utterly amazing. left me in complete and utter awe. I especially liked the whole "My sould wanders in unvoiced wonderment..." stanza.I wish I could write so beautifully...you're making me green over here. because you're younger than me, I don't think I've ever read a piece by someone younger than me that just made my jaw drop.
once again, very very nicely done. keep up the good work.
-Tormented Romantic-