for This Chance May Be Your Last3/8/2005 c1 
40godsgurl
Oh, wow. that reminds me of a story i wrote. i read it, and i got goose bumps. awesome job.
40godsgurlOh, wow. that reminds me of a story i wrote. i read it, and i got goose bumps. awesome job.
10/21/2003 c1 7Samurai101
How true. This reminds of what randy has been pounding inot the youth's head. "Tommorrow is prmised to no-one." Great story, though sad.
7Samurai101How true. This reminds of what randy has been pounding inot the youth's head. "Tommorrow is prmised to no-one." Great story, though sad.
8/7/2003 c1 Miranda Crystal-Bearer
O.o Whoah. A bit abrupt, but leaving quite an impression. I found the lack of detail (action, description, ect.) a bit disconcerting. Other than that, well done. Again, you get the prize for the best spelling here. ^^
O.o Whoah. A bit abrupt, but leaving quite an impression. I found the lack of detail (action, description, ect.) a bit disconcerting. Other than that, well done. Again, you get the prize for the best spelling here. ^^
8/3/2003 c1 49The Hitokiri Onigiri
*blinks* Wow, great piece... great message, too. Great altogether! Words fail me late at night, can't you tell?
49The Hitokiri Onigiri*blinks* Wow, great piece... great message, too. Great altogether! Words fail me late at night, can't you tell?