
8/5/2003 c1
6Black and Silver Dreamer
*claps* Yeah! I like it. Waiting in present tense is hard for me... I always mess up. But you did wonderful! Heh, lost track of everything but his watch and his goal
I LOVE that part...
Keep up the writing, I like your perspective on things, I don't recall reading any piece about someone just observing the world before. At least not one I liked... But I have now found one! *add story to Favorite Story List*

*claps* Yeah! I like it. Waiting in present tense is hard for me... I always mess up. But you did wonderful! Heh, lost track of everything but his watch and his goal
I LOVE that part...
Keep up the writing, I like your perspective on things, I don't recall reading any piece about someone just observing the world before. At least not one I liked... But I have now found one! *add story to Favorite Story List*