for Exorcise4/4/2004 c1 
138Lina Inverse
I really like the use of italics... They brought the perfect mix of hopeless romance and bitter angst into this poem.
138Lina InverseI really like the use of italics... They brought the perfect mix of hopeless romance and bitter angst into this poem.
12/11/2003 c1 vers le sud
Wonderful! Gorgeous imagery, great free verse flow...keep up the awesome work!
Wonderful! Gorgeous imagery, great free verse flow...keep up the awesome work!
10/14/2003 c1 28Kellza
I like the phrase... "breathless delight that ripples." It reminds me of a girl standing in a field and a breeze ruffles the grass. Too much anime? Anyway, I also like "a stain of a memory." Like you know the person will never be gone, but they'd be reduced to a mere stain, ugly scar tissue you barely notice. Good poem. It better not be about who I think it is, though.
28KellzaI like the phrase... "breathless delight that ripples." It reminds me of a girl standing in a field and a breeze ruffles the grass. Too much anime? Anyway, I also like "a stain of a memory." Like you know the person will never be gone, but they'd be reduced to a mere stain, ugly scar tissue you barely notice. Good poem. It better not be about who I think it is, though.
8/8/2003 c1 7She's a Star
Oh, that was amazing. Just so beautifully written and melancholy and impassioned and . . . just good. :-) (Gee, I have a way with words.)
'If only it were
that easy.
If only I really
wanted you gone.'
I love that.
Wonderful poem.
~Star
7She's a StarOh, that was amazing. Just so beautifully written and melancholy and impassioned and . . . just good. :-) (Gee, I have a way with words.)
'If only it were
that easy.
If only I really
wanted you gone.'
I love that.
Wonderful poem.
~Star