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4/4/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
I really like the use of italics... They brought the perfect mix of hopeless romance and bitter angst into this poem.
12/11/2003 c1 vers le sud
Wonderful! Gorgeous imagery, great free verse flow...keep up the awesome work!
10/14/2003 c1 28Kellza
I like the phrase... "breathless delight that ripples." It reminds me of a girl standing in a field and a breeze ruffles the grass. Too much anime? Anyway, I also like "a stain of a memory." Like you know the person will never be gone, but they'd be reduced to a mere stain, ugly scar tissue you barely notice. Good poem. It better not be about who I think it is, though.
8/8/2003 c1 7She's a Star
Oh, that was amazing. Just so beautifully written and melancholy and impassioned and . . . just good. :-) (Gee, I have a way with words.)

'If only it were

that easy.

If only I really

wanted you gone.'

I love that.

Wonderful poem.

~Star
8/8/2003 c1 57NeWriter
I have never read this type of poem... amazingly I really liked it! =) It shows another possible way of getting rid of love... cool! =D

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