
4/22/2004 c1 Alanna of Trebond
Awesome poem! I really enjoyed this.
Awesome poem! I really enjoyed this.
12/30/2003 c1 Melissa
Hey, Enchanted! I love this poem. It's so good, I just love the rhyming and everything. You should write more poems.
Hey, Enchanted! I love this poem. It's so good, I just love the rhyming and everything. You should write more poems.
12/11/2003 c1 Emerald Jade
I love this poem! It's awesome!
I love this poem! It's awesome!
9/26/2003 c1 Libby Ann
I really, really envy your writing skills. I loved the parts in the middle of the poem about all that fantasical stuff that "cool" people call childish. I don't think it's childish at all. It's just appreciation. I'm quite daydreamer like you are. Although I don't believe in magic where you wave a wand and something happens, I believe in the magic of this universe. Like a kind of force; a mysterious power. I just love the vividness of poetry. It's simply fabulous.
I really, really envy your writing skills. I loved the parts in the middle of the poem about all that fantasical stuff that "cool" people call childish. I don't think it's childish at all. It's just appreciation. I'm quite daydreamer like you are. Although I don't believe in magic where you wave a wand and something happens, I believe in the magic of this universe. Like a kind of force; a mysterious power. I just love the vividness of poetry. It's simply fabulous.
8/4/2003 c1
37Peachez 24
A Writer's Poem? This is a writer's ANTHEM! *chuckles* no, really. The idea captured was great! I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~

A Writer's Poem? This is a writer's ANTHEM! *chuckles* no, really. The idea captured was great! I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
8/4/2003 c1
4phillie
This was a quality poem right there. The words and pace of your story fit perfectly together to make it nice and smooth. The adjectives combined with words to make the poem work out perfectly. I love the idea of this poem. It stirs my emotions in my brain, inspiring me to write. All I have to say is. I LOVE IT! Great Job!
~phillie~

This was a quality poem right there. The words and pace of your story fit perfectly together to make it nice and smooth. The adjectives combined with words to make the poem work out perfectly. I love the idea of this poem. It stirs my emotions in my brain, inspiring me to write. All I have to say is. I LOVE IT! Great Job!
~phillie~
8/4/2003 c1 Jani
Excellent poem! I love the way it rhymes. You have a really vivid imagination. It kind of reminds me of the way a child looks at the world. (A very small child.) Good jub, gurl!
Excellent poem! I love the way it rhymes. You have a really vivid imagination. It kind of reminds me of the way a child looks at the world. (A very small child.) Good jub, gurl!
8/4/2003 c1 AVIGON
It wasn't the form, nor the structure, it wasn't the rhythm or the rhyming, it was the concept that brought a smile to my face. Lovely, cute poem.
It wasn't the form, nor the structure, it wasn't the rhythm or the rhyming, it was the concept that brought a smile to my face. Lovely, cute poem.