for Rain12/28/2003 c1 
22Non-existent Puritanism
I liked this poem. A lot. adding to fave stories. THis was really good. I actually followed it and it flowed really well.
22Non-existent PuritanismI liked this poem. A lot. adding to fave stories. THis was really good. I actually followed it and it flowed really well.
11/19/2003 c1 13DeathsDragon
^_^ Thanks for the review, any one I showed just, "so?" I'm truely touched you liked it enough to review.
And with this poem... ^_^
It's hard to say, seeing as I just LOVE the rain, summer or winter. Sweet music to the knowing ear.
"If the heavens where to cry, there true tears and pain for this world,
We would call it rain,
And drown in the water and sorrow."
Keep writing,
Lilith
13DeathsDragon^_^ Thanks for the review, any one I showed just, "so?" I'm truely touched you liked it enough to review.
And with this poem... ^_^
It's hard to say, seeing as I just LOVE the rain, summer or winter. Sweet music to the knowing ear.
"If the heavens where to cry, there true tears and pain for this world,
We would call it rain,
And drown in the water and sorrow."
Keep writing,
Lilith
8/7/2003 c1 4Liquid Gold
lol on your a/n. i really like your style of writing poetry, you have a gift with the words. very good.
4Liquid Goldlol on your a/n. i really like your style of writing poetry, you have a gift with the words. very good.
8/7/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This was beautifully written. You created some lovely imagery with your description. I love rain...usually :) Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis was beautifully written. You created some lovely imagery with your description. I love rain...usually :) Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
8/6/2003 c1 Aurelia
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
8/5/2003 c1 Baby Milo
Hey don't dis the rain! I liked playin in it at Traverse City, it smells YUMMY! Anyway another great poem (i'm just trying to get into charector for halloween)! Um nice words and um it's really good. BYE!
Hey don't dis the rain! I liked playin in it at Traverse City, it smells YUMMY! Anyway another great poem (i'm just trying to get into charector for halloween)! Um nice words and um it's really good. BYE!
8/4/2003 c1 jo
hey ugaboo! luv the poem...better than what ill eva write... i dont wanna play in cold and rain wahh! jk well still great poem the only problem is that im an athiest..but that really doesnt matter...so great poem luv it! xox jojo
hey ugaboo! luv the poem...better than what ill eva write... i dont wanna play in cold and rain wahh! jk well still great poem the only problem is that im an athiest..but that really doesnt matter...so great poem luv it! xox jojo