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8/8/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Breathtaking. Really. Your imagery here is... *mouths wordlessly while gesturing emphatically*

Sometimes our way with words is swept away by beauty...

"Then opening my hand,/I unwillingly/Let go."

No words! My mouth is empty!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
8/7/2003 c1 endless040
Powerful poem. Love the line

"Coursing through my outlined veins"

Nice images. Great ending. Awesome!
8/7/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
powerful, emotional work. well written. does not need footnotes.

welldone, keep it up!
8/7/2003 c1 4Canada
Complicated? No... Just hidden meanings. I personally enjoyed a lot, since I've felt those emotions before so it makes it easier to comprehend. I'm going to enjoy seeing some more of your work. ^_^ Keep writing'.

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"Fighting for peace is like screwing for virginity"

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8/7/2003 c1 1EloiseMidget
Your use of words is just superb! Such imagery! My imagination is running wild!
8/7/2003 c1 MoonlightRegret
I am always surprised by the endings you give, its so different. Its not the usual kind I read. Wow! This piece has perfect imagery, its so beautiful. I liked it very much! Nice!

Just to let you know, I'm not registered on fictionpress(I think). I've got stuff on ffnet tho. Go check me out if you have the time! (:
8/7/2003 c1 30silent-snowflake
i thought this was great. it has an element of reality and yet a distinct level of fantasy and your language and images are terrific. all in all i'd say it's quite an achievement.
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