for Of Dogs and Wolves8/12/2005 c1 pseudonyms-shadow
This is a great story,you should update it please...I'll give you a cookie _
This is a great story,you should update it please...I'll give you a cookie _
3/16/2004 c1 
1Kinoki
i luv wulvs! please finish it! gimme more! oh, and by the way, yes, Roan knows she's a girl. (i'm kinda late aren't i?)
1Kinokii luv wulvs! please finish it! gimme more! oh, and by the way, yes, Roan knows she's a girl. (i'm kinda late aren't i?)
1/18/2004 c5 8Kezkay
o! so cool! why haven't you updated recently! I demand you finish this! This smart-ass little girl amazes me! Don't stop! no stopping allowed! *nudges* *winks* *KICKS*
-Kez
8Kezkayo! so cool! why haven't you updated recently! I demand you finish this! This smart-ass little girl amazes me! Don't stop! no stopping allowed! *nudges* *winks* *KICKS*
-Kez
10/5/2003 c2 warnthepenguins
I like it! A very interesting premise. Your writing and depiction of speech are both great. But are you sure that the older thief would really choose to undertake such a risky venture as "kidnapping" a noble just out of compassion? Wouldn't he need some other incentive?
I like it! A very interesting premise. Your writing and depiction of speech are both great. But are you sure that the older thief would really choose to undertake such a risky venture as "kidnapping" a noble just out of compassion? Wouldn't he need some other incentive?
9/21/2003 c4 Kezkay
The birds and the bees... those poor, poor children. O, I wonder how Rae is gonna accompish that feat. hmm... I must go to review another's story now, catcha ya later, -Kez
The birds and the bees... those poor, poor children. O, I wonder how Rae is gonna accompish that feat. hmm... I must go to review another's story now, catcha ya later, -Kez
9/21/2003 c3 Kezkay
"It is ever so nice to have gold and jewels.” hehe, ah...how true. Wow, the princess is only 7? She's dang mature, but I can see why! Stupid tutors! Let the poor girl have some fun, MWA HAHA HA!
Haha, the Wolf, speechles... I really like that name by the way. A guild of thieves called the wolves...tres cool.
"The pleasure is mine." mmhmm, yeah, haha. Ah, the benefits of being the leader.
I'm gonna go read the next chapter now, -Kez
"It is ever so nice to have gold and jewels.” hehe, ah...how true. Wow, the princess is only 7? She's dang mature, but I can see why! Stupid tutors! Let the poor girl have some fun, MWA HAHA HA!
Haha, the Wolf, speechles... I really like that name by the way. A guild of thieves called the wolves...tres cool.
"The pleasure is mine." mmhmm, yeah, haha. Ah, the benefits of being the leader.
I'm gonna go read the next chapter now, -Kez
9/21/2003 c2 Kezkay
"As dense as they are, they do notice people shouting after awhile.” Gosh, that's hilarious! The poor girl! Starved if she makes a mistake! *growls*
Haha, the whole peasant/thief/noble speech thing was done out perfectly, and all three characters so far are awesome, each unique. I'm gonna go read the next chapter now, -Kez
"As dense as they are, they do notice people shouting after awhile.” Gosh, that's hilarious! The poor girl! Starved if she makes a mistake! *growls*
Haha, the whole peasant/thief/noble speech thing was done out perfectly, and all three characters so far are awesome, each unique. I'm gonna go read the next chapter now, -Kez
9/21/2003 c1 Kezkay
aw! Daemon is so cute! sorry, just had to get that out. A little nine-year-old thief, with propah grammah! hehe. I love this story so far! The beginning, with the two pairs of eyes... VERY enthralling! Kalarae was perfectly described: her boredom, intelligence, watchfulness, and eagerness to see the world! I can't wait to see what happens next!
-Kez
PS- thanks for the review!
aw! Daemon is so cute! sorry, just had to get that out. A little nine-year-old thief, with propah grammah! hehe. I love this story so far! The beginning, with the two pairs of eyes... VERY enthralling! Kalarae was perfectly described: her boredom, intelligence, watchfulness, and eagerness to see the world! I can't wait to see what happens next!
-Kez
PS- thanks for the review!
9/19/2003 c1 54Werecat99
Loved the opening lines. They certainly drew me in the story.
The account of her everyday life was vivid, and I could feel her boredom.
And I certainly liked your little thief. Especially his name.
Great first chapter. I'll be back for more.
54Werecat99Loved the opening lines. They certainly drew me in the story.
The account of her everyday life was vivid, and I could feel her boredom.
And I certainly liked your little thief. Especially his name.
Great first chapter. I'll be back for more.
9/3/2003 c5 14Ninsetta Tristel Sundar
i really like this story. It's going on my favorites list. I love strong female characters...Write more soon.
14Ninsetta Tristel Sundari really like this story. It's going on my favorites list. I love strong female characters...Write more soon.
8/18/2003 c4 5SakuraCC87
hehehe Sounds like Kelarae is either really good at sneaking out or her family doesn't much care for where she usually goes... lol, sorry if i haven't reviewed earlier, but times lately have been to busy for me too... I promise to review more in tbe future!
5SakuraCC87hehehe Sounds like Kelarae is either really good at sneaking out or her family doesn't much care for where she usually goes... lol, sorry if i haven't reviewed earlier, but times lately have been to busy for me too... I promise to review more in tbe future!
8/11/2003 c3 22silverheart121
pretty cool...thanks for reviewin my story by the way...u are now on my favorites list btw
22silverheart121pretty cool...thanks for reviewin my story by the way...u are now on my favorites list btw