for No Sleep Eyes1/25/2004 c1 ylem
You have this fantastic way with descriptions. It's marvelous; really innate. Good for you.
You have this fantastic way with descriptions. It's marvelous; really innate. Good for you.
9/20/2003 c1 
8Soleil Antoinette
Nice poem here - flowing and the ideas are strung together smoothly... I'm not a really into poetry per say, but you are a good writer of both stories and poems - bravo!
8Soleil AntoinetteNice poem here - flowing and the ideas are strung together smoothly... I'm not a really into poetry per say, but you are a good writer of both stories and poems - bravo!
9/18/2003 c1 10Porcelain Mask
Unique style of poetry, not bad for staying up at 1:26 in the morning. I rather like this.
10Porcelain MaskUnique style of poetry, not bad for staying up at 1:26 in the morning. I rather like this.
9/1/2003 c1 3iccess-america
I'm a big fan of poetry. This flowed very well and you give the impression that your talking about many different things. I liked a lot! Though I found the 'time 1:26 tatooed in blood' to be slightly random. Unless that's the time you decided to finally sleep...
Iccess-america
3iccess-americaI'm a big fan of poetry. This flowed very well and you give the impression that your talking about many different things. I liked a lot! Though I found the 'time 1:26 tatooed in blood' to be slightly random. Unless that's the time you decided to finally sleep...
Iccess-america
8/9/2003 c1 12Terra Tigra
Ah, now this is poetry. I'm glad to see you writing some poems, I'm rather found of them ^.^ This is very good.
You use some wonderful descrptions and metaphors which create some wonderful imagery. The flow works pretty well.
Nice job.
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-
12Terra TigraAh, now this is poetry. I'm glad to see you writing some poems, I'm rather found of them ^.^ This is very good.
You use some wonderful descrptions and metaphors which create some wonderful imagery. The flow works pretty well.
Nice job.
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-