for Howling Woods8/9/2006 c4 Kelly
Really awesome! Really cool... UPDATE, DAMN YOU! UPDATE!
Really awesome! Really cool... UPDATE, DAMN YOU! UPDATE!
12/10/2004 c4 
8Neapon
Whoa, Man I felt like I was running along with them. My heart is beating so fast. This is pretty good. *cough*writemore*cough* I look forward to new chapters! ^_^
8NeaponWhoa, Man I felt like I was running along with them. My heart is beating so fast. This is pretty good. *cough*writemore*cough* I look forward to new chapters! ^_^
11/29/2003 c4 2White Lyhter
I said I'd review until the very end, didn't I?
Christina is annoying beyond words. That's all I have to say.
2White LyhterI said I'd review until the very end, didn't I?
Christina is annoying beyond words. That's all I have to say.
11/15/2003 c4 Demon of the Flame
Oh my gosh! That was so good. I couldn't take my eyes awayfrom the computer. The details where so great... this whole chapter was great. I can't wait for the next one. I've just got to know who the person is... and why the hell would they live in a place like that. Well, please update soon. ^-^
Oh my gosh! That was so good. I couldn't take my eyes awayfrom the computer. The details where so great... this whole chapter was great. I can't wait for the next one. I've just got to know who the person is... and why the hell would they live in a place like that. Well, please update soon. ^-^
11/13/2003 c4 Spyt Fyre
i luve the action! my god! i don't like christina, she's a ditz...they annoy me...lol! but i like lae! she's so cool! anyways, hope you update soon
WRITE ON!
i luve the action! my god! i don't like christina, she's a ditz...they annoy me...lol! but i like lae! she's so cool! anyways, hope you update soon
WRITE ON!
11/13/2003 c3 Spyt Fyre
hey sup! i haven't read this story in a long time! wow...its soo good...riveting...
i noticed some spellin errors, noting prominent...but when Thane came back and his father was coming towards him, you called him Thorn. and there was another one, where i think you meant collar but you said called...but other than that...wow...onto the next chapters...
WRITE ON!
hey sup! i haven't read this story in a long time! wow...its soo good...riveting...
i noticed some spellin errors, noting prominent...but when Thane came back and his father was coming towards him, you called him Thorn. and there was another one, where i think you meant collar but you said called...but other than that...wow...onto the next chapters...
WRITE ON!
11/12/2003 c4 Rachel
i was just as terrified as Lae would have been! well written! and that guy with blue-silver eyes was kind of creepy o.O. lol. i can't wait to see who she saw! keep writing!
TheCrystalMaiden is an excellent writer :D. her Cat's Eye is pretty good too :).
i was just as terrified as Lae would have been! well written! and that guy with blue-silver eyes was kind of creepy o.O. lol. i can't wait to see who she saw! keep writing!
TheCrystalMaiden is an excellent writer :D. her Cat's Eye is pretty good too :).
11/11/2003 c4 pony
u cant stop the story there! no! it was going so good! all the running..chasing...black shadow...WOW!
u gosta rite more! what did lae see b4 she passed out? i hafta hafta right more!
u cant stop the story there! no! it was going so good! all the running..chasing...black shadow...WOW!
u gosta rite more! what did lae see b4 she passed out? i hafta hafta right more!
11/11/2003 c4 Queen Godzilla
Hey, look. I'm commenting! I'M COMMENTING! Update this thing, yo. I hope you'll update it at least in another two weeks or sommat.
I like where this is going. And what will happen to the girls? =D
Hey, look. I'm commenting! I'M COMMENTING! Update this thing, yo. I hope you'll update it at least in another two weeks or sommat.
I like where this is going. And what will happen to the girls? =D
11/8/2003 c3 pony
ahu cant stop there! u hafta write more! u just left it! how could u! no! no no no no
its juss the beginning! u gosta write more!
ahu cant stop there! u hafta write more! u just left it! how could u! no! no no no no
its juss the beginning! u gosta write more!
8/22/2003 c1 Angelica
Hey!
You tweaked! Oh, it's much more catchy, or at least I think so! Thanx 4 taking my advice seriously and not just blowing it off like some others would have. By the way, r u a beta reader? Just curious, e-mail me with the answer asap!great story, update!
Hey!
You tweaked! Oh, it's much more catchy, or at least I think so! Thanx 4 taking my advice seriously and not just blowing it off like some others would have. By the way, r u a beta reader? Just curious, e-mail me with the answer asap!great story, update!
8/18/2003 c3 3Repair My Wings
oh. my. gosh. *screams* what is going to happen? wait don't tell me write it.
3Repair My Wingsoh. my. gosh. *screams* what is going to happen? wait don't tell me write it.
8/16/2003 c3 2White Lyhter
Thanks for skipping lines. ;)
Okay, very well done. I especially like the mini-conversation between Lae the Sensible and Lae the Bold. Christina is just... annoying. Really.
2White LyhterThanks for skipping lines. ;)
Okay, very well done. I especially like the mini-conversation between Lae the Sensible and Lae the Bold. Christina is just... annoying. Really.