for My Father and I8/20/2004 c1 
13Artificial Refuge
This is really good, you got the emotion across really well. Well written, good stuff.
13Artificial RefugeThis is really good, you got the emotion across really well. Well written, good stuff.
1/18/2004 c1 2Wolfe the pink haired Fai
That is really deep. I feel sorry for the girl and it's a story! I guess i know that people DO live like that in the world.
2Wolfe the pink haired FaiThat is really deep. I feel sorry for the girl and it's a story! I guess i know that people DO live like that in the world.
9/17/2003 c1 8twistedpsyche
*sniffle* wow. That's so... wow. Hit really close to home for me, but I loved it just the same. Very evocative. Oh yeah, thank you for reviewing 'Forgotten'. ~ Jenn
8twistedpsyche*sniffle* wow. That's so... wow. Hit really close to home for me, but I loved it just the same. Very evocative. Oh yeah, thank you for reviewing 'Forgotten'. ~ Jenn
9/15/2003 c1 15lilitaliandragon
aw...but i don't think 14yr-olds say although some much younger than i...otherwise...aw i like it...
15lilitaliandragonaw...but i don't think 14yr-olds say although some much younger than i...otherwise...aw i like it...
8/8/2003 c1 Grandma
Tacey...here's a thought for you...
ever try writing about your Heavenly Father?
And, your relationship with Him?
Tacey...here's a thought for you...
ever try writing about your Heavenly Father?
And, your relationship with Him?
8/8/2003 c1 Brie
This is a good story. Very well put together. Keep working at it. I like the view point of from the daughter. It shows what some teenagers are going through. It shows lots of promise. Keep it coming! Brie
This is a good story. Very well put together. Keep working at it. I like the view point of from the daughter. It shows what some teenagers are going through. It shows lots of promise. Keep it coming! Brie