for The Truth Hurts7/8/2006 c1 
10do-i-exist
Although the prologue is really short, this is a good beginning to a story. You draw the reader in well.
10do-i-existAlthough the prologue is really short, this is a good beginning to a story. You draw the reader in well.
11/27/2005 c5 22The Astronaut
Firstly, don't use periods instead of commas. Secondly, reread your chapters before you upload. Thirdly, make sure you have an interesting story that you can tell lavishly, not just some jumbled mess about a crush that you just slapped together unceremoniously.
In short: this sucks.
22The AstronautFirstly, don't use periods instead of commas. Secondly, reread your chapters before you upload. Thirdly, make sure you have an interesting story that you can tell lavishly, not just some jumbled mess about a crush that you just slapped together unceremoniously.
In short: this sucks.
5/17/2005 c9 34miss-elty
wow. i just found this story... i'd crap on about how much i reckon you need to update this story... but i don't know what i'd do if one of my besties tried to commit suicide... either i would write a hell of a lot... or nothing at all. so i hope everything is going alright with you and your friend(s)... =) *hugs* since you sound like you need lots of them... ~
34miss-eltywow. i just found this story... i'd crap on about how much i reckon you need to update this story... but i don't know what i'd do if one of my besties tried to commit suicide... either i would write a hell of a lot... or nothing at all. so i hope everything is going alright with you and your friend(s)... =) *hugs* since you sound like you need lots of them... ~
3/15/2005 c9 11yourevilsoul
Hey, I really liked the story! It's great coz it's actually true, lol. Don't you love recalling things? I hope u continue, Hope your friend feels ok :) ciao
11yourevilsoulHey, I really liked the story! It's great coz it's actually true, lol. Don't you love recalling things? I hope u continue, Hope your friend feels ok :) ciao
2/28/2005 c9 8Harsh Notes
I like this story. It's full of drama and love. Hope your friend feels better.
8Harsh NotesI like this story. It's full of drama and love. Hope your friend feels better.
1/24/2004 c9 2ParasolParodies
i understand and also i would like to comfort your friend who-tried-to-kill-herself that she should love her life to the fullest no matter what! if it's something about people discriminating you, here's my words
"I am beautiful, no matter what they say. Words can't bring me down.."
-Christina Aguilera
"They can try hard to make me feel that I don't matter at all,
But I refuse to falter in what I believe or lose faith inmy dreams..."
-Mariah Carey
2ParasolParodiesi understand and also i would like to comfort your friend who-tried-to-kill-herself that she should love her life to the fullest no matter what! if it's something about people discriminating you, here's my words
"I am beautiful, no matter what they say. Words can't bring me down.."
-Christina Aguilera
"They can try hard to make me feel that I don't matter at all,
But I refuse to falter in what I believe or lose faith inmy dreams..."
-Mariah Carey
1/24/2004 c8 ParasolParodies
okay...now this is really going along...your fanfics sor realistic (since it's your love life) the readers can actually relate to it...now that's what i call good story!
okay...now this is really going along...your fanfics sor realistic (since it's your love life) the readers can actually relate to it...now that's what i call good story!
1/24/2004 c7 ParasolParodies
it's nice you can say your feelings but not to the extent of calling your mom a bitch...once tried (thinking and writing)but when she did agreed on something i was dying to try for...i felt somewhat guilty...oh waht am i saying! i'm here to review not to tell a story!hehehehehe...just keep on coming!
it's nice you can say your feelings but not to the extent of calling your mom a bitch...once tried (thinking and writing)but when she did agreed on something i was dying to try for...i felt somewhat guilty...oh waht am i saying! i'm here to review not to tell a story!hehehehehe...just keep on coming!
1/24/2004 c6 ParasolParodies
is Dreamcatcher really scary for you? I've watched dreamcatcher and obviously, it wasn't a really scary movie. Just a suspense movie and a really gorey one but not totally scary. And what really kept bugging me is that the movie has nothing to do with the title itself! oh well, nice one, i might say...c"
is Dreamcatcher really scary for you? I've watched dreamcatcher and obviously, it wasn't a really scary movie. Just a suspense movie and a really gorey one but not totally scary. And what really kept bugging me is that the movie has nothing to do with the title itself! oh well, nice one, i might say...c"
1/24/2004 c4 ParasolParodies
i'm going to review every chapter...hm..oh well, I know what the character here's feeling(it's you)coz it somewhat what I'm feeling now too...I can somewhat relate to it...
i'm going to review every chapter...hm..oh well, I know what the character here's feeling(it's you)coz it somewhat what I'm feeling now too...I can somewhat relate to it...
1/24/2004 c2 ParasolParodies
okay, now how did that happen? hehehehe...anywayz it was a good start, keep on writing and i'll keep on reading...hehehehe
okay, now how did that happen? hehehehe...anywayz it was a good start, keep on writing and i'll keep on reading...hehehehe