for The Truth Hurts11/11/2003 c8 
11DreamNightmare
lmao...the condom thing sounds like sumtin my friends would say...lol but yea...nice chappie...n dont worry my familys embarrassin 2 *sigh* o n im workin on the next chapter! im weird...i did 2 chs ahead of the next 1 hehe...but yea expect it sumtime this wk!
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarelmao...the condom thing sounds like sumtin my friends would say...lol but yea...nice chappie...n dont worry my familys embarrassin 2 *sigh* o n im workin on the next chapter! im weird...i did 2 chs ahead of the next 1 hehe...but yea expect it sumtime this wk!
DreamNightmare
10/7/2003 c1 8LoverOfTheDarkHairedDog
Hey Jenn. Its me, LoverOFTheDarkHarireddog. I just wanted to say that your story, The Truth Hurts,is really good so far. I got to go, school and stuff. Good work.
8LoverOfTheDarkHairedDogHey Jenn. Its me, LoverOFTheDarkHarireddog. I just wanted to say that your story, The Truth Hurts,is really good so far. I got to go, school and stuff. Good work.
8/27/2003 c6 RainShadow2005
I like how this is going. I can tell it's based on reality since it doesn't have a formulaic plot sequence. Real life rarely goes in a straight line and I see your story jumps around like that ... like real life. I'm anxious to see exactly what happens that ends up making you so anguished in the prologue. I hope you update this story soon so I can find out.
I like how this is going. I can tell it's based on reality since it doesn't have a formulaic plot sequence. Real life rarely goes in a straight line and I see your story jumps around like that ... like real life. I'm anxious to see exactly what happens that ends up making you so anguished in the prologue. I hope you update this story soon so I can find out.
8/23/2003 c6 6the1andonlygnush
I like your drama, it is v. good! I wonder what will happen next! Your story is good but perhaps you should use real word (like you instead of u). It make your writing look more professional. Anyway, either way you do your writing is fine with me! Happy writing, come out w/ your next chapter soon! I m dying 2 know what happens!
6the1andonlygnushI like your drama, it is v. good! I wonder what will happen next! Your story is good but perhaps you should use real word (like you instead of u). It make your writing look more professional. Anyway, either way you do your writing is fine with me! Happy writing, come out w/ your next chapter soon! I m dying 2 know what happens!
8/14/2003 c6 11DreamNightmare
hehe...movies r fun lol...neways...ur ritin is going much better...i can c how uve improved these las chapters
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarehehe...movies r fun lol...neways...ur ritin is going much better...i can c how uve improved these las chapters
DreamNightmare
8/14/2003 c6 2Zero2K3
Hey, I think that this is the best chapter that you've written so far! you added a little more detail, and the story is getting better by the chapter!good job and keep goin!
*Zero2k3*
2Zero2K3Hey, I think that this is the best chapter that you've written so far! you added a little more detail, and the story is getting better by the chapter!good job and keep goin!
*Zero2k3*
8/13/2003 c5 15Aneena Darc
Whew! Okay...First off, I have a serious question (not to be funny) but I was wondering if this was kinda like a dialogue you are keeping or if it is an actually "story" or a "to-be novel"? I wasn't sure... Anyway! I thought your 'story' was really good, and I don't know if you want critisim or not, but I just wanted to give you this little clue/hint: Detail...Detail...DETAIL! Ya need a lil bit more hun. You got the backbone of the story written really well, however, the reader can't really paint a picture in their head with this story. For instance when Jenn is on the phone with Sarah, "Oh! No I don't. Why?" (You may want to add something lke...) I sat straight up in my chair, my eyes bulged as a silent cursed myself for being so thoughtless.
Just a thought...but GOOD JOB!
15Aneena DarcWhew! Okay...First off, I have a serious question (not to be funny) but I was wondering if this was kinda like a dialogue you are keeping or if it is an actually "story" or a "to-be novel"? I wasn't sure... Anyway! I thought your 'story' was really good, and I don't know if you want critisim or not, but I just wanted to give you this little clue/hint: Detail...Detail...DETAIL! Ya need a lil bit more hun. You got the backbone of the story written really well, however, the reader can't really paint a picture in their head with this story. For instance when Jenn is on the phone with Sarah, "Oh! No I don't. Why?" (You may want to add something lke...) I sat straight up in my chair, my eyes bulged as a silent cursed myself for being so thoughtless.
Just a thought...but GOOD JOB!
8/13/2003 c5 2Volare
hi, just wanted to say i love the story so far, cant wait till the next chapter comes. bye.
2Volarehi, just wanted to say i love the story so far, cant wait till the next chapter comes. bye.
8/13/2003 c5 11DreamNightmare
lalala...i jus find this hilarious cuz i have a friend named sarah...lol n her las names spencer hehe im sorry i couldnt help but laugh...um...neways love the chapter...rite more :)
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarelalala...i jus find this hilarious cuz i have a friend named sarah...lol n her las names spencer hehe im sorry i couldnt help but laugh...um...neways love the chapter...rite more :)
DreamNightmare
8/13/2003 c5 8to advertise here call 1800
getting more intriguing. i like that youre not changing anything, keepin it real... lol. Keep it up!
8to advertise here call 1800getting more intriguing. i like that youre not changing anything, keepin it real... lol. Keep it up!