for The Truth Hurts8/12/2003 c4 
20Xi
1... i realy like the idea for the storyy... even tho i juss decided to come in now...
but couldn't you make LONGER chapters? *SIGH*.
aiight...
-MandaZ
20Xi1... i realy like the idea for the storyy... even tho i juss decided to come in now...
but couldn't you make LONGER chapters? *SIGH*.
aiight...
-MandaZ
8/12/2003 c4 6the1andonlygnush
I like ur story. It is very good. Try to use different words, k? It will spice up ur writing. Thanx again 4 reviewing MY story. I love evanescence + Linkin Park too! ne ways, ur story is good 4 a first one. Keep going! Everyone always gets better w/ time and practice.
6the1andonlygnushI like ur story. It is very good. Try to use different words, k? It will spice up ur writing. Thanx again 4 reviewing MY story. I love evanescence + Linkin Park too! ne ways, ur story is good 4 a first one. Keep going! Everyone always gets better w/ time and practice.
8/12/2003 c4 11DreamNightmare
wow u updated faster then i thought u would lol...its gettin interestin now...n i jus wanna say the next ch i have up im gonna promote u hehe...along w/ sum of the others but ur my main chik rite now
11DreamNightmarewow u updated faster then i thought u would lol...its gettin interestin now...n i jus wanna say the next ch i have up im gonna promote u hehe...along w/ sum of the others but ur my main chik rite now
8/12/2003 c3 8to advertise here call 1800
great story so far. keep it up. its cool that its all real and youre not changing anything, not even the names... but are you sure the ppl in your story wont be offended that you talked about them so openly? oh well...
anyway, you must be canadian, if you had a much music video dance... there was one at my school in grade seven.. anyway, thats besides the point.
getting back to the story, great plot, good characters, just get into the story more... k, that is all, update pleez
8to advertise here call 1800great story so far. keep it up. its cool that its all real and youre not changing anything, not even the names... but are you sure the ppl in your story wont be offended that you talked about them so openly? oh well...
anyway, you must be canadian, if you had a much music video dance... there was one at my school in grade seven.. anyway, thats besides the point.
getting back to the story, great plot, good characters, just get into the story more... k, that is all, update pleez
8/12/2003 c3 11DreamNightmare
god...u need more ppl 2 review...i feel bad...i'm gonna help u...dont wrry Xi was the only one who reviewed my story Kill Me With Love 4 like 5 chs lol THEN i got more ppl...^-^ o n even tho it was short the story's still great
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmaregod...u need more ppl 2 review...i feel bad...i'm gonna help u...dont wrry Xi was the only one who reviewed my story Kill Me With Love 4 like 5 chs lol THEN i got more ppl...^-^ o n even tho it was short the story's still great
DreamNightmare
8/9/2003 c2 DreamNightmare
am i the first 2 review? lol neways i like that story...keep goin! i'll b waitin 4 more
am i the first 2 review? lol neways i like that story...keep goin! i'll b waitin 4 more